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Fic: Follow the Yellow Brick Road (5/?) Lamb/Veronica (R)

Oct 25, 2006 23:03

Chapter Title: It Ain't Ruby Slippers
Author: synful_trixx
Pairing/Character: Lamb, Veronica with appearances by various characters
Word Count: 2438
Rating: R
Summary: The answers aren’t always the ones you want to find, or the ones that fall in your lap.
Spoilers: All of Season One
Warnings: Adult Sexual Situations

Previous Chapters

( Veronica didn't turn toward him when he entered her room. )

veronica, user:sl3pygoldnst0rm, lamb, r

Comments 13

afrocurl October 26 2006, 05:19:10 UTC

The turn of Lamb from a sensetive guy to total asshole was so quick and so hard to take. I really needed a good distraction from that.

I adore the way you have Lamb play back and forth with his emotions about the whole situation.

Hopefully this kick from Lamb will give Veronica some motivation to do something about it.

synful_trixxie October 28 2006, 18:19:55 UTC

HEE! Thank you for reading! And for the help ;)

afrocurl October 28 2006, 18:36:50 UTC

But of course...I like to help out!

motylik October 26 2006, 07:24:10 UTC

I *love* how Lamb had a hand in making Veronica as strong as she is on the show. I think he did that in canon too so it's great to see it reflected in this fic so well. This is really good. Hope you continue soon. :)

synful_trixxie October 28 2006, 18:27:34 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! And teh compliments. *bounces*

monimala October 26 2006, 13:29:45 UTC

I can't necessarily say that I "like" this fic. But that's probably a reaction you're okay with since you're writing a very uncomfortable, twisted tale. I do find it intriguing and am interested to see where you're going. I thought the first chapter was a bit rickety but you've really got Lamb nailed down by part five and I like how he forced Veronica into fighting.

synful_trixxie October 28 2006, 18:30:13 UTC

Thank you so much!

I am totally okay with that reaction. Really. This fic makes ME uncomfortable, but... the idea just won't leave my head.

Thank you so much for the compliments on Lamb... I think the more time I spend working with him, the more comfortable I get.

Thank you again for taking the time to comment :)

tempestquill October 26 2006, 17:21:32 UTC

I love it! You keep Lamb so in character and I just can't wait for more! I love how he goes from caring to asshole with good intentions, and I love that he's the spark that drives Veronica to put her bitch face on! It's a great dynamic, and I want more! Now! Dammit!

synful_trixxie October 28 2006, 18:32:01 UTC

LOL Thank you so much for continuing to read!

jen_knee_suu October 27 2006, 02:09:26 UTC

Ohhh! I saw this update yesterday and between working out, yelling at OTH & Lost..and I don't remember what else, I didn't get a chance to read it. But now..freakin loved it!! You are soooo freakin evil tho! You better not turn me into more of a Lamb/Veronica shipper than a LoVe shipper!! *lol* I don't think that's possible...I hope!
Anywayas..awesome update! Loved the talk. And it was kinda sweet that he fell asleep with his head on her bed...and she was runnign her fingers through her hair. The talk tho...total Lamb! Which I'm glad. He got her pissed off. And now she's going to go to hime..and have him help her. The question is...will something actually spark between them...AND...will it maybe spark a memory deep in Veronica's memories...
Anyways..amazing job! Can't wait for the next one!!!

synful_trixxie October 28 2006, 18:32:36 UTC

... I'll try not to turn you into a Lamb lover *grins* but I make no promises.

Thank you so much for reading!