FIC: Darkness in the Light, 2/2 (Harry Potter, Lucius/Harry, NC-17)

[darkrosetiger]

Title: Darkness in the Light: Curious [2/2]
Author:darkrosetiger
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Lucius/Harry
Rating: NC-17 (Explicit sex, breathplay)
Warnings: Semi-chan (16-year-old Harry/adult Lucius)
Summary: The opposite of hatred isn't love--it's fascination.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and Lucius Malfoy are the sole property of J.K. Rowling; I'm only

Comments

[sorchar]

Draco is nothing more than a pale shadow of him, an imperfect, flawed copy.

I love that line.

[irda]

Just as gorgeous as the first part. The bit about them meeting in a pub kind of reminded me of our (very short) Harry/Lucius RP. Remember that? Heee.

I must praise you on your Harry characterization. He's my favourite of all the HP characters, and I'm so sick of seeing him as some angsty, needy, stupid kid who wants to be half-raped and then spend an hour crying about it. Nice work. ^^

[adrian_turtle]

>He was nearly silent when he came, unlike me. I tried not to, but I did cry out a little when I couldn't hold myself back any longer. Lucius' voice was a soft caress as he whispered in my ear: "Mine." I almost laughed then, because I knew I was safe

Oh. Oh my. *squirm* This just echoes with power. Thank you.

[morcowen]

*purrs*
that was powerful and gripping and I can't decide whether I like as much or even better than part one. And it had the cane. mwah, gotta love his cane. *g*
I think my favourite line is:
It's simply part of the game, and we both understand the rules.
yes. wonderful.

[maidenform]

Wow. I loved how whenever you switched points of view, your style changed to match the new speaker. Not many writers can do that. Iknow I have a hard time with it. Again, a memory.