You try my patience! Make Your Choice!

Mar 18, 2005 23:36


Title: Alternative
Author: Claire Starling
Rating: PG
Notes: Written for the livejournal community spikedawn's "Choices" challenge.
Summary: Post-Chosen. Each choice has it's consequences.

Alternative )

ff: drabble, fanfiction, ship: spawn, fandom: b:tvs, ff: challenge

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hieispike March 18 2005, 20:57:57 UTC
Good one! I can easily picture that happening.

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darkinnocent March 18 2005, 21:04:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I love your stories, so your comment means a lot to me. I tried to make it as realistic as I could... and it seemed to come off the way I wanted it to. This is my first drabble, so it was hard for me to try to explain quickly. Hopefully, it turned out all right.

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jans_intentions March 18 2005, 21:10:24 UTC
...of course she opened the window...

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darkinnocent March 19 2005, 19:14:26 UTC
As she said, she "had no choice."

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bright_lumos March 18 2005, 21:36:16 UTC
Short, but sweet. And really true to Joss-verse. Of course Buffy would find out and come charging in to "rescue" her. This was a really nice answer to the "Choices" challenge.

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darkinnocent March 19 2005, 19:15:36 UTC
Thank you so much! I figured, even after the whole "I died to save the world thing", Buffy still wouldn't be keen on the fact that Spike, her ex-lover, is dating her baby sister. I also made sure that Xander would come along for the dusting as well. ^^

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eurothrashed March 19 2005, 02:17:16 UTC
Oh lovely. I adore how you spin Dawn's resentment without having it too over-the-top and season 5 whiny.

Utter perfection.

Oh, and the "Daddy Angel" line had me chuckling evilly. She really doesn't like him all that much, does she?

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darkinnocent March 19 2005, 19:17:01 UTC
Your compliments mean so much to me because you are a fucking genius. ^^ I tried hard to make it grown-up Dawnish. Thanks for the "Daddy Angel" thing. I personally like Angelus better than Angel, and I think that Dawn is a "I hold a grudge" kind of girl.

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redwolf March 19 2005, 04:23:42 UTC
Gorgeous. Nice train of thought writing.

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darkinnocent March 19 2005, 19:17:14 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.

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