long comment is longmrtoulouseApril 8 2010, 20:00:58 UTC
Oh, that ending - it's a beautiful ending, but it's almost evil of you to just leave it like that! Of course, I'm totally going to go on believing the best came of it, but it's still going to kill me having it end with a cliff-hanger of sorts.
It was great finally having the chance to read this in it's entirety, to learn how everything was resolved. I also liked re-reading the beginning, though, there were so many little things I had forgotten about or hadn't picked up my first time through and that really amused me.
"Since when have our lives become an episode of Heroes?" Santana asked, her voice completely flat and Quinn burst out laughing.
"Can I be Sylar?" Quinn asked, between giggles. "He's hot."
"Bitch, please," Santana scoffed. "I'm way hotter than you could ever be."
Haha, okay, so that might've been my favourite part and you definitely get props from me for making a Heroes reference. I adore Santana and Quinn's relationship, it's not fake or bitchy, there's still snark but it's all good natured
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The plot was very interesting, and despite being an AU, the characters were definitely recognizable. I think my favorite part was the friendship between Finn/Rachel/Quinn.
Quinn's power was fascinating, and so was the way she learned how to expand and improve her control of it. The twist - Puck being the "bad guy" (only not really) - caught me completely by surprise.
And I thought the ending was perfect; hopeful cliffhangers are underrated.
One more thing: you might want to post this to rachel_quinn. I'm sure they'll appreciate it over there :)
I really wanted Finn, Rachel and Quinn to be really good friends in this and it was definitely one of the major points I had down on my wee notes before I even started writing properly, so you saying you thought it was your favourite part made me beam. Also, I'm glad the characters were recognisible, because with AUs characterisation is something that can cause sleepless nights *g*.
I'm glad the ending worked for you! I debated for so long over it, but it was my favourite one that I ended up with.
Thank you for suggesting that! I forgot all about posting at other comms, which is kind of a stupid thing to do *g*. Have done now. Thanks for reading!
I wish that I have an "I'm not worthy" gif to use here because my god, this is just... Freaking epic and I am so not worthy.
The cliff-hanger ending was delicious by the way. Evil, but still delicious. And I very likely am going to have dreams about this fic tonight 'cause my subconscious just likes resolution, lol.
I loved a lot of the lines in every part but I'm not going to quote any because I'm pretty sure this comment would end up being just as long as the fic itself.
I had a bad feeling when Puck actually started talking to Quinn and then when he was like, "I like you", bells were literally going off in my head and I wanted Quinn to just RUN, lol. But I'm glad he redeemed himself there
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Ah, thank you so much for this comment. It made me so happy and there was a very wide, very ridiculous smile on my face for quite some time after reading it
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*blushes* Thanks so much for this comment. It made me smile and made the frustration of writing a long fic completely worth it. I'm glad you enjoyed it (even the ending!) and hearing (reading?) that you thought I nailed the characters made my day!
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It was great finally having the chance to read this in it's entirety, to learn how everything was resolved. I also liked re-reading the beginning, though, there were so many little things I had forgotten about or hadn't picked up my first time through and that really amused me.
"Since when have our lives become an episode of Heroes?" Santana asked, her voice completely flat and Quinn burst out laughing.
"Can I be Sylar?" Quinn asked, between giggles. "He's hot."
"Bitch, please," Santana scoffed. "I'm way hotter than you could ever be."
Haha, okay, so that might've been my favourite part and you definitely get props from me for making a Heroes reference. I adore Santana and Quinn's relationship, it's not fake or bitchy, there's still snark but it's all good natured ( ... )
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The plot was very interesting, and despite being an AU, the characters were definitely recognizable. I think my favorite part was the friendship between Finn/Rachel/Quinn.
Quinn's power was fascinating, and so was the way she learned how to expand and improve her control of it. The twist - Puck being the "bad guy" (only not really) - caught me completely by surprise.
And I thought the ending was perfect; hopeful cliffhangers are underrated.
One more thing: you might want to post this to rachel_quinn. I'm sure they'll appreciate it over there :)
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I really wanted Finn, Rachel and Quinn to be really good friends in this and it was definitely one of the major points I had down on my wee notes before I even started writing properly, so you saying you thought it was your favourite part made me beam. Also, I'm glad the characters were recognisible, because with AUs characterisation is something that can cause sleepless nights *g*.
I'm glad the ending worked for you! I debated for so long over it, but it was my favourite one that I ended up with.
Thank you for suggesting that! I forgot all about posting at other comms, which is kind of a stupid thing to do *g*. Have done now. Thanks for reading!
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The cliff-hanger ending was delicious by the way. Evil, but still delicious. And I very likely am going to have dreams about this fic tonight 'cause my subconscious just likes resolution, lol.
I loved a lot of the lines in every part but I'm not going to quote any because I'm pretty sure this comment would end up being just as long as the fic itself.
I had a bad feeling when Puck actually started talking to Quinn and then when he was like, "I like you", bells were literally going off in my head and I wanted Quinn to just RUN, lol. But I'm glad he redeemed himself there ( ... )
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