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[darkicedragon]

Okay, I started going through the ninth chapter of Searching and then went 'screw it'. D: Too much! I just added like, a line instead of making the scene I was going to make a proper drawn out discussion - partially because bringing it back to the point where this scene is sandwiched in between might have made it weird but still. Argh, I hate

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[lucathia_rykatu]

Pft, Shodin as Oak or Elm... that'd be kind of amusing. Though he would also feel a little different with a name change. XD;

Are you going to be showing your novel to friends and family? XD;

[darkicedragon]

XDD It didn't feel right, and if Shodin got a name change, then Marland would get a name change to like, Mark or something, and then I just wouldn't be able to picture them at all! (Although it's making me realise how ridiculous Shodin's name is in context. Pfffthaha.) So, they're in a parallel universe of Torpin, and not on Earth. :3

XDD I don't think so. Least not my family - I'd feel kinda self-conscious if I showed them it (and then there's all the swearing that's in it. XD;;;) For friends, I'd probably show them it and then hide and die of embarassment. X3;;