'Mary's Smile', John, Sam/Dean

Sep 21, 2006 19:54

OMG WORDS!

I finally managed to put words together with some kind of coherency... I hope. (Please, tell me if I'm wrong, k? I'm so totally unable to do more than squee, because OMG WORDS!)

Author: darkhavens
Title: Mary's Smile
Pairing/Fandom: Supernatural - John, Sam/Dean
Rating: PG
Words: 550
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
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suki_blue September 21 2006, 19:02:21 UTC
Ooh, naughty bois!

Very well written, my darling. You've found your words! Yay!!

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darkhavens September 21 2006, 19:27:40 UTC
*squees at your icon* :D

Thank you, darlin'! I have to admit that most of this was scribbled weeks ago during a break at work, but I managed to add to it and tweak it and I still feel damn proud of finally being able to string words together again. I was really starting to worry.

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katbcoll September 21 2006, 19:07:01 UTC
*\o/* Words! Good words! Great words strung together... uh greatly! Yeah! That's it!

Seriously, welcome back to the muses and this was wonderful!

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darkhavens September 21 2006, 19:31:02 UTC
Thank you! :D

Losing my words is the scariest thing that's ever happened to me. I spent most of my 20s not writing and it was a very depressing time. YAY WORDS!

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tiferet September 21 2006, 19:26:27 UTC
I love this bit of gorgeousity :D and what you are saying here about love.

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darkhavens September 21 2006, 20:11:04 UTC
Thank you. :D

I think true love is when you see the stinky socks in the corner, and you see the stubble in the sink, and you smile, because it's their socks, and their stubble. ;)

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thismaz September 21 2006, 19:38:23 UTC
Strange, wonderfully comfortable story. Kind of weird, very nice. I love the memory of Mary's smile and the emotions it brings to the surface of John's memory.

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darkhavens September 21 2006, 20:14:29 UTC
Thanks!

I think John must have (eventually) got used to seeing little flashes of Mary in both of his boys, but that smile would stand out as special, as theirs.

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tabaqui September 21 2006, 19:40:47 UTC
*smooooooooch*
Wheeeeeee! Hi!

And ooh, luff. Poor John - no clue what to do! Luff this:
And Sam just rolls his eyes and starts explaining vegetables to Dean until Dean hauls off and hits him and then drags him to the car.

Heeee!

Hope you don't mind a teeny thing...'messing about under the hood' would prolly be 'messing around'. About's just not used that way here much. *Some*, but not much.

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darkhavens September 21 2006, 20:19:56 UTC
You know Sam's spent time following Dean around at the grocery store 'explaining' bananas and broccoli until Dean threatens to stuff a watermelon in his mouth, sideways, if he doesn't shut the fuck up. *g*

Thanks for the tweak! (Always, always appreciated.)

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tabaqui September 21 2006, 22:08:04 UTC
Heeeeeee.
Well, I can bananas and maybe...corn. Or carrots. But broccoli?
*squints at you*

:)

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darkhavens September 27 2006, 22:57:24 UTC
Hey, it's green and bushy - can't you just imagine Sam trying to tickle Dean with it, jam it in his ear, maybe? :D

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