'Fundamentally Altered', 2/5 for stagesoflove R2 - Arousal, #2 Excitement

[darkhavens]

Author: darkhavensTitle: Fundamentally Altered, 2/5

Comments

[imagination55]

Poetic genius, man. Nuff said.
Loved this just as much as the 1st part.

[darkhavens]

Thank you!

Sometimes the poetic thing takes me by surprise. I sit down to write and can almost feel the pulse of the piece before I've even typed a word of it. I'm so glad it works because I honestly don't think I could turn the damn thing off it I tried. *g*

[tabaqui]

Oooh, man.
Yeah.
Bruises.
:)
*shiver*

[darkhavens]

Thank you!

we do seem to have a mutual thing for bruises, don't we? *g*

[mf_luder_xf]

You're a god.

[darkhavens]

Hee! Thank you. :D

*poses at the altar*

[belleimani]

You are so descriptive and sexy with you writing! Love it.

[darkhavens]

Thank you!

I think this is one of the first (if not the first) piece I've written in second person POV and it feels so much more involved and immediate than my usual third person externa; view. I'm just so very glad it works! *g*

[belleimani]

It does work. I'm so surprised this is your 1st First person pov. It's very well written!

[emella]

Dear lord this is sexy. Love the hot heat and feel of it. Great descriptions and character p.o.vness. :P Great job babe! :)

[darkhavens]

Thank you!

I just said that I think this is my first real attempt at 2nd person POV and I'm so very happy to see that it's working. :D