Oh, Sasuke

Feb 24, 2007 22:21


Go, Sasuke! Kill Orochimaru and return to Konoha! That is my fondest, fondest wish... at least one part is sort of coming true. Sasuke's attempt at killing Orochimaru has made me flail in absolute glee. Obviously, he's not going to settle for being a damn container for Orochimaru and was only staying there for gaining the knowledge and power he ( Read more... )

fic snippets, animanga: naruto, naruto fic, unbeta-ed

Leave a comment

Comments 3

calambmity February 24 2007, 17:54:58 UTC
*hugs*
Oh! You've made my morning an oh so happy one.
I like the way Sasuke thinks.
This fic reminds me of when you give someone a lollipop and then you yank out of their mouth a few seconds later and smash it on the ground. >.< I guess Sasuke was the one doing the smashing, almost makes you almost want to feel bad for Orochimaru...almost
Wonderful job.

♥ calambmity

Reply

darkgloom February 25 2007, 01:20:45 UTC
lol, can I just say that I love that analogy? :D

Thank you for the lovely comments. *g* I haven't quite finished the fic yet...and well, this might be just a feeling, but I think this could be long. Or longer than I expected.

I seem to stuck in Sasuke-mode or something. *laughs*

Reply

calambmity February 25 2007, 06:40:48 UTC
I think one of my friends actually did that to someone, or she hit him on the forehead with a lollipop...I can't remember which one. XDDDD

Personally, I think that this could stand alone as a one shot or as a multi-chapter fic. You've made so that the beginning has an almost completion to itself that it leaves the rest up to your imagination, just as Sasuke is imagining. If there happens to be a sequel or more chapters to come I think it would make this more wonderful.

Sasuke-mode, that's good, I wish I had at least a writing mode. XP

Fabulous work.

~Mity

Reply


Leave a comment

Up