Comments | darkgloom: [Fic] In the Absence of Sound

darkgloom

[Fic] In the Absence of Sound

Dec 10, 2006 13:04

I was meant to do this yesterday, but sleep beckoned...

Pairing: Sasuke/Naruto
Rating: PG-PG13
Summary: "You think I'm going to leave now and let you run away again? You think I'm going to let you go that easily?"
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animanga: naruto, completed fic: naruto, completed fic, naruto fic

Comments 10

kitanabychoice December 10 2006, 00:40:58 UTC

I love this so, so much. It leaves me with a very bittersweet feeling and I am amazed how much you wriggled into Sasuke's mind, and there was two-way dialogue even though Sasuke wasn't actively using his voice. I also like how Naruto kept pounding it into Sasuke's head that he wasn't leaving, until Sasuke had to just realize and give into it.

Overall? I enjoyed this very much, and it's definitely going into my memories. ♥ Good job.

darkgloom December 10 2006, 20:01:50 UTC

Thank you. *g* I enjoyed writing this a lot as well, even though Sasuke took some damage-I just couldn't see Sasuke staying without Naruto doing something extreme.

cryth December 10 2006, 01:11:47 UTC

Aughh. I'm left pretty much speechless right now. This was absolutely amazing. You're a fantastic writer, they're both so much in character and just, omg. Still speechless. ♥♥♥

darkgloom December 10 2006, 20:04:22 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad everyone was in character-it's been a while since I've written Naruto, and, well, I thought I was a bit rusty, so speechless is good. *g*

coldtofu December 10 2006, 01:59:05 UTC

This is really good. I like how sweet it was at the end. :)

darkgloom December 10 2006, 20:05:20 UTC

Thank you. :) They really are sweet-they just need to get through all the blood and violence first. *g*

maplepie_tree December 10 2006, 06:00:35 UTC

oh dear lord, i think i've fallen in love with this pairing all over again. you're one of the few people out there right now doing IC fics, and i just about cried by the end of this.

simply spectacular! please write more, your style is very beautiful!

darkgloom December 10 2006, 20:10:51 UTC

Thank you. :) I will definitely try to write more Naruto fics. Like you, I'm beginning to fall for this pairing all over again. *g*

Again, thanks for the lovely feedback. I'm glad everyone was in character-since I haven't written Naruto for a while, I thought for sure I'd be a bit rusty.

wmelon_kaiye November 9 2007, 12:13:08 UTC

Ugh, the bittersweetness just kills me.
I want to be able to just scream, I HATE THIS or I LOVE THIS, but I can't.
XD

Perhaps life is just like that. There is no absolute.

Omgosh, this was wonderful <3

darkgloom November 10 2007, 07:30:53 UTC

Thank you. ♥