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darkgloom

[Fic] Refraction

Jan 06, 2009 22:06

Title: Refraction
Rating: PG
Pairing: Yamapi-centric, mostly Pikame.
Summary: The second time wasn't any easier.
Disclaimer: Don't own anything of Johnny's. Just a fic writer... writing. For fun.
Notes: Many thanks to my beta who did a quick look through.

Originally written for je_ficgames as a pinch hittter and the first time I'd written something ( Read more... )

completed fic: je, je: shuji to akira, je: pikame, completed fic, je

Comments 22

misao_duo January 6 2009, 12:12:22 UTC

That was adorable and a bit sad but mostly adorable :(
I was a lot bit heartbroken at the mention of KAT-TUN debuting without Kame I'm guessing you were pinch hitting for Team What If :P but Yamapi being there took a little bit of the sting out of it.
I loved Pi's interactions with Toma but I loved his interaction with Ryo (he is so bitchy and yet so cute lol :D)even more.
And your Kame, it looks like he has a lot of Shuuji on him and it fits this setting.

You didn't have to worry about this, it's lovely. thinking about requesting non-angsting Akamepi from you . What do you think :D

darkgloom January 7 2009, 09:40:45 UTC

ajsdfljdf you guessed right. I could never break up KAT-TUN otherwise. :( Poor Kame, the only reason I was able to follow through with it was because Yamapi was there and he understood. :(

Glad you enjoyed ♥ I find writing Ryo hilarious, for some reason, and I guess I have a subconscious thing for Ryopi and Tomapi? :D

Kame definitely has a lot of Shuji on him here. Personally, the character Shuji really broke my heart and I get the feeling personal factors made the character seem more real... ajsdfl like Kame was living and breathing Shuji at once point.

♥! dead, I hope I will be able to write good non-angsting Akamepi? XD

tretton January 6 2009, 13:37:05 UTC

akdgfnakjngfd ♥

darkgloom January 7 2009, 09:42:07 UTC

♥♥♥

hanny2luv January 6 2009, 14:37:14 UTC

I love it. So sweet and cute, and a bit sad too. But i still love it.

Thanks for sharing.

darkgloom January 7 2009, 09:43:21 UTC

thanks for reading! :D

kriszeth January 6 2009, 16:57:51 UTC

i- i don't know what to say. you broke my heart. and shuuji's heart. and yamapi's heart.

so,how is it i still think this must go on my folder of sugoi fics? T.T

darkgloom January 7 2009, 09:44:56 UTC

ajsdfljd thank you. :(

At least it's a What-If and never happened? :(

gothicauthor January 6 2009, 22:58:12 UTC

alkng This is so cute, but. But you broke KAT-TUN. DDD:

GA

darkgloom January 7 2009, 09:47:38 UTC

ajsdf I know T__T I can't believe I did that to Kame-at least it never happened? T_T

gothicauthor January 7 2009, 18:31:25 UTC

T.T

You know, strangely, I can see KAT-TUN without Jin but not KAT-TUN without Kame. T.T Maybe it's because the first was reality for awhile, so it couldn't be helped, but. I DON'T KNOW I REALLY DON'T THINK THAT THERE CAN BE KAT-TUN WITHOUT THE K? D:

But yes, thank goodness it never happened. T.T

GA