So many fabulous lines, m'dear! I love, love, love this chapter!!
Hair angst came through. That's been a theme this last week, hasn't it? ;) Love Vaisey calling Jack "pretty boy". LOL! I can hear his voice so clearly there.
Much was fantastic! “You are not my type,” the outlaw spat as he turned his head away from the foul breath that was breathing on his face.
The reference to Carter made my heart break. :(
And again “I don’t think you heard me,” Much said, his voice was like thunder as he turned and aimed the blaster he had palmed off Gisborne’s still body. “I said, JIGGER OFF!”
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Hair angst came through. That's been a theme this last week, hasn't it? ;) Love Vaisey calling Jack "pretty boy". LOL! I can hear his voice so clearly there.
Much was fantastic! “You are not my type,” the outlaw spat as he turned his head away from the foul breath that was breathing on his face.
The reference to Carter made my heart break. :(
And again “I don’t think you heard me,” Much said, his voice was like thunder as he turned and aimed the blaster he had palmed off Gisborne’s still body. “I said, JIGGER OFF!”
The scene on the rooftop is perfect! *hugs*
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And, I'll have to say, I'm loving Much with the solid brass...uh...nerves!!
Seriously? Two more chapters? You have to begin another immediately! Hear?
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