[Black Cat] [Train/Rinslet] (can't) catch that cat - one shot

[darkenedsakura]

My roommate went home, sick. I cannot afford to be sick right now, and I'm worried, even though I have an immune system of pure steel. Motherfucker.

...Anyway. Sigh. Also, major hate towards ff.net for not allowing parentheses in titles. Why can’t you just accommodate the whims of my crazy writing all the time. Why. ]:

Title: (can’t) catch that

Comments

[starswing]

hot damn that was an amazing read. *A* I love your Rinslet, and Train is just so charming and you did a great job with getting around his asexuality, not to mention EVE.

Words cannot express how hard I laughed at Eve.

[darkenedsakura]

You're always way too nice to me. What is that. 8D But I'm so relieved you think Train seems, y'know, plausible. Damn him and I want to write more stuff with him, maybe from his POV this time, but oooh Train you...grr. ]:<

And yeah, I kept laughing as I wrote the Eve parts. XD;;; Oh Eve. Why are you so awesome. XDDDD

[smakn]

Ooh...I love this. This is OTP even though Rinslet and Train get barely any moments together...

I think you did a good job with getting their personalities--especially with merging little bits of past and present while telling Rin's side. And Eve, the ending was perfect. XD

One thing, though, is that the last scene in the hallway was a little confusing. It was hard to understand how they were moving.

[darkenedsakura]

Ahaha. I'm not as big on T/R as my other pairings, but I think they're good for each other, and I did want to fic something.

I'm also really glad that people liked Eve. XD

Yeah, I ran the hallway scene by a few people and they all gave it the okay (had some tweaking done, but), but I wasn't entirely sure about it. I don't blame you if you got a little confused. 8D; But yeah, anyway, thanks for reading, glad you liked :]