Finally I managed to catch up with the story (things've been crazy here). I was glad when I found the Adommy version. And you did a great job with it.
Juanita leaned back, a satisfied expression in her eyes. “Mr. Kris will have to make that decision for himself, don’t you think? And that Tommy--you have to give him time, Mr. Lambert. Such things can’t be rushed. But it’s no use beating yourself up about this. You want his love, not his pity.” I’m glad you let Adam’s mom and Juanita give him advices again. And they both were amazing and told him exactly what he needed to hear, IMO.
Am I ever glad you're only catching up now. Chapter 10 was kind of a mess, before Feverfewmole nudged me in the right direction; be glad you missed that. :) It was weird, writing Kris out of it. Thanks for reading!!
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I was glad when I found the Adommy version. And you did a great job with it.
Juanita leaned back, a satisfied expression in her eyes. “Mr. Kris will have to make that decision for himself, don’t you think? And that Tommy--you have to give him time, Mr. Lambert. Such things can’t be rushed. But it’s no use beating yourself up about this. You want his love, not his pity.”
I’m glad you let Adam’s mom and Juanita give him advices again. And they both were amazing and told him exactly what he needed to hear, IMO.
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Thanks for reading!!
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