“Hey,” a voice boomed from above. “Your ten o’ clock appointment is here!” Immediately the bass fell silent. “I’m coming!” Hurried steps clattered down a wooden staircase, and then the bead curtain parted and a slim figure appeared. Oh my, the first part of this chapter was so suspense. I was afraid that Adam would have changed his mind and returned back home.
“Tommy,” Adam said again, the name like a prayer on his lips, and then he laid a hand on Tommy’s shoulder, his touch very light as if he was afraid the other man might shatter at any moment. A jolt ran through the prince’s body and he jerkily stepped forward into Adam’s arms. AWWWWW! *happy for the reunion*
“Stop the small talk, Adam. Explain why you’re with him.” Tommy had his arms folded in front of his chest, and Adam’s heart sank a bit more at how unapproachable he looked right then. Tommy sounded resolute - but I was glad for that. Adam was right. He had changed so much and he was so mature in the scene with Adam.
“Kris will be gone,” Adjani interrupted from behind.
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The answer's 'no', lol. I couldn't. To use him like I did, and then kill him in the end would be more than mean. And I must admit, I'm always a little smitten with my main characters, especially with those who are a bit problematic at first, like Tarik in STL, ot Kris here, so I want good things to happen to them in the end.
It's always so interesting to see your reactions. When you write a fic, there's no suspense left whatsoever, and the sex-scenes stop being sexy pretty soon; it's hard to gauge how people's reactions will be, and it's kind of rewarding to know it's worked. Thank you. :)
I knew this chapter would be happy and sad at the same time, and I was right! The renunion between Adam and Tommy was happy but when Tommy found out about Kris I felt so sorry for him. And the ending...I'm worried about what's happened to Kirs now. I hope it isn't anything too bad. There's a rollercoaster of emotions in this chapter, and I loved it! :)
Yeah, I'm evil like that. I must admit that I like cliffies, when I'm writing them, that is... Chapter 8 is done, but still needs a bit of polishing. I'm aiming for Wednesday. Soon enough? ;)
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“I’m coming!” Hurried steps clattered down a wooden staircase, and then the bead curtain parted and a slim figure appeared.
Oh my, the first part of this chapter was so suspense. I was afraid that Adam would have changed his mind and returned back home.
“Tommy,” Adam said again, the name like a prayer on his lips, and then he laid a hand on Tommy’s shoulder, his touch very light as if he was afraid the other man might shatter at any moment. A jolt ran through the prince’s body and he jerkily stepped forward into Adam’s arms.
AWWWWW! *happy for the reunion*
“Stop the small talk, Adam. Explain why you’re with him.” Tommy had his arms folded in front of his chest, and Adam’s heart sank a bit more at how unapproachable he looked right then.
Tommy sounded resolute - but I was glad for that. Adam was right. He had changed so much and he was so mature in the scene with Adam.
“Kris will be gone,” Adjani interrupted from behind. ( ... )
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The answer's 'no', lol. I couldn't. To use him like I did, and then kill him in the end would be more than mean. And I must admit, I'm always a little smitten with my main characters, especially with those who are a bit problematic at first, like Tarik in STL, ot Kris here, so I want good things to happen to them in the end.
It's always so interesting to see your reactions. When you write a fic, there's no suspense left whatsoever, and the sex-scenes stop being sexy pretty soon; it's hard to gauge how people's reactions will be, and it's kind of rewarding to know it's worked. Thank you. :)
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And no, I wouldn't say it's too bad... ;)
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But this evil cliffhanger at the end... I hope you update soon, like NOW!! LOL
Hugs!
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Chapter 8 is done, but still needs a bit of polishing. I'm aiming for Wednesday. Soon enough? ;)
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I hope you mean the Wendesday tomorrow, LOL!
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