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fannishliss September 29 2011, 17:10:50 UTC
Perfect. The Farewell Tour!Eleven + Father'sDay!Rose = Perfection!!

you chose an amazing moment and a perfectly believable scenario. I love that he told her his name. I only wonder if she secretly knew it was him? I guess she didn't know about regeneration at this point, but the romantic in me thinks she would have recognized him at some point.

Beautiful, sad, but strangely hopeful story. :)

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darkbunnyrabbit September 29 2011, 17:57:30 UTC
I'm glad the moment and scenario worked. I think her fuzzy memories and eventual relationship with his other self helped him justify his failing at pseudonyms once again.

I imagine Apalapucians don't actually look very humanoid, so it's possible at some point she might relate it to the Metacrisis Doctor and realize it then.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

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roselikeschips September 30 2011, 01:05:51 UTC
Wow... idek. This was awesome. LIKE ALWAYS. <333

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sapphire_child September 30 2011, 06:02:38 UTC
Oh gosh...that last line.

Just beautiful. And so believably constructed - this felt like a missing scene from the show. Just wonderful.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

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cinamoncupcake November 21 2011, 04:34:39 UTC
*sniffle* This was so lovely. Eleven on his own farewell tour, spending one last night with his beloved.

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