Control

[darkblysse]

Title: Control
Type: Yaoi, PWP
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Elricest
Warnings: Elricest, smut, very dominant Alphonse

A/N: Kehehe~ Seme!Al is my favorite still. XD; Also, fun with italics this time 'round, too!

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Control.

It's something that Alphonse craves, needs. And it's something that Edward is more than willing to

Comments

[nikita_cheri111]

Oh damn that's hot. What a wonderful thing to wake up to. =^.^= The teasers you gave me for this just made it so much better getting to read the final product.

I loved the abuse of italics. It gives it that perfect little edge

New favorite descriptive that I will not to steal: sun-spun hair. Mmmm pretty

[darkblysse]

Haha, I thought you'd like getting to finally read this~

Italics are fuuuuuuuuuuun, especially in present tense. XD

Pft, feel free to steal. I'm pretty sure I saw that somewhere in a fic or something and it got lodged into my head. xD God knows I can't come up with something that pretty D:

[nikita_cheri111]

You come up with plenty of pretty. *looks pointedly at entry* Lots and lots of pretty.

[darkblysse]

... I wouldn't call that pretty. Smutty, yes...

[baroqueangel]

Do you know how hard it is to NOT write Elricest when you keep offering things like this to read??

Damn woman, that was good :P <33

[darkblysse]

*BRB, gigglefit*

Elricest needs more writers, damnit! xD I'm, like, the only really active one. :(

[baroqueangel]

This is the closest you'll get from me for a while He sat staring out over the water, tear tracks long since dried on his cheeks. How could brother be so mean? Didn't he want father to come home? He really didn't understand Ed but did he need to understand him to be his brother? Was understanding necessary to love someone? He didn't think so but then he was only 9 years old, perhaps he would learn more about it when he was older, he hoped so

[alanna214]

Ohhh... The smut. The very pretty smut. (Yes, I also agree that smut can be pretty. Especially the kind that involve really pretty blonde boys.) I think Blysse's Elricest smut is the prettiest of all. \^_^/

[darkblysse]

Oh, God, late reply D:

Smut can totally be pretty! XD And fjkdfsd thank you ;o; <3

[freed_wings]

Love! Somehow very sexy and very sweet at the same time. Thumbs up.

[darkblysse]

Thanks :D

[12gatsunohime]

...How on earth did I go this long without reading this? This is totally getting saved to my hard drive; it's one of the best pieces of yours I've read!

[darkblysse]

ashsklfdsasa that has got to be one of the best compliments... xD <3

So glad you liked this, and that you like my other fics! :D