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darkblysse

Love Thyself, Chapter Four

Jan 08, 2009 20:42

Title: Love Thyself, Chapter Four
Rating: NC-17
Type: Yaoi, kinda A/U
Pairings: Ed/Al
Warnings: Bondage, Dominant!Al (and lots of him!!), voyeurism, masochism, humiliation, Elricest, Socket!Sex, topping from the bottom

A/N: This is my favorite chapter. By far. I got to write all of the little, kinky things I've wanted to put into a fic for a while ( Read more... )

fma oneshot, elricest, fanfic

Comments 15

peace_of_hope January 10 2009, 02:04:16 UTC

I've never seen the automail kink used with the nerves to trigger an orgasm, but oh, how I love it! I'm a big fan of some kinky elricest too, so this hits the spot (no pun intended).

Another sexy fic!

darkblysse January 10 2009, 02:59:59 UTC

And I've never seen the socket!sex done like this, either. But I frikkin' love it this way--much hotter than the ones I've read. <333

(Ahaha, no pun intended, but I still laughed retardedly at it!)

jeeperscreeperz January 10 2009, 04:06:37 UTC

i LOVE you! ♥ ♥ ♥

this was really awesome and totally lived up to expectations. I loved the kinks they were super hot XD i haven't read a story where they took advantage of his nerve endings. very nice!

its always a pleasure to read your works! :D

darkblysse January 10 2009, 04:14:31 UTC

D'aww, I love you, too, and your awesome comments! <3

I'm so glad you like it! And I totally didn't realize that the whole 'nerve cable rape' was... original? >_>; It was really the only thing that made sense to me, to be honest. I don't like the normal blindly-poking-around socket!sex. xD

And hopefully I'll have the start of another multi-chapter fic up within a day or so! ^_~

mssupafan January 11 2009, 09:15:31 UTC

ohhh myyyy *drool* You are made of AWESOME!!! I've read all the chapters to this and some of your other one-shots and you are brilliant at PWP! *bows to you*

I'm in love *puppy eyes with stars* =]

darkblysse January 11 2009, 09:38:08 UTC

D'aww, you are just too sweet, hun! ^_^ Thanks so much! And double thankies for adding me as a friend! =D

I'll be sure to keep posting lots of fics! ^_~

jori_ness January 12 2009, 05:27:32 UTC

Wheee~ I go to a con and come back to find these lovely chapters. Amazing as always, Miss Blysse! 83

darkblysse January 12 2009, 05:31:19 UTC

Thanks so much!

Hope you had fun at the con, hun! I've always wanted to go to one! D= *Is jealous!!*

sirkrunk741 January 15 2009, 13:15:53 UTC

Wow. That was... WOW.

darkblysse January 15 2009, 18:51:28 UTC

Inorite? ;D