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darkaslay

fic: who i was, from the start

Feb 02, 2011 23:28

Tiffany always made a point of leaving Jessica's apartment before Jessica awoke early in the morning. Sometimes she'd even slip out at night, sometimes noiselessly, sometimes loudly if she was in the mood for a confrontation, or sex. However, Jessica never seemed to be in the mood for confrontations like Tiffany was (although sex was another story ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, jeti, snsd, fiction

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anonymous February 3 2011, 06:11:30 UTC

JETI...MY BROKEN HEART FOREVER

BUT YOONYUL...OMFG YOONYUL...

WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONSSSSSSSSSS

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!

AND I AM SORRY I LEFT MY CAPS ON THIS WHOLE TIME, BUT OMG MY EMOTIONS ARE SCREECHING RIGHT NOW LOL

darkaslay November 10 2011, 23:26:41 UTC

I LIKE THE IMAGERY OF SCREECHING EMOTIONS.

anonymous February 3 2011, 06:16:27 UTC

how? TT__TT
fix it! fix my heart that you've broken!!!!!1!!!!11

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darkaslay November 10 2011, 23:25:59 UTC

Dear God, Tiffany, why are you so precious?

anonymous February 3 2011, 12:50:52 UTC

you wrote this chapter beautifully, really. Every word, phrase and emotion experienced and conveyed by the characters are clear. It was really nice to see words being 'placed' in such a way. It was almost overwhelming too. I really can't say or think of anything.
even though i died a little on the inside when Tiffany slept with Taek, i'd like to thank him for saying this one line, "You look guilty." I think that might've told Tiffany something important or at least let her feel something that she should.

Thank you for writing!

letseaticecream February 3 2011, 14:09:36 UTC

OMG this update killed me ;~; I usually read on SSF, but LJ is more convenient :)

Ahhhh Tiffany Tiffany I don't even know what to say. She makes me so frustrated, but at the same time I can't help but sympathize with her broken self. But I'm still so angry, and Jessi is being so sweet and she can't help but ruin it. It's like a trainwreck - I just can't look away.

"I'll make you proud one day. I'll give you everything you want, even the things you didn't know you wanted until you had them. And when people ask if you remember what heartbreak feels like, you'll tell them no, because I'll be the one that made you forget."

;~; I was a figurative babbling mess by this sentence. Oh Yuri and Yoona, why so sweet and mushy and fluffy?

I will be pining here for your next update (28th cannot come any sooner). Setting alarms, marking my calendars etc.

*btw, just a note that the song in Pochahontas is 'Colors of the Wind', if that's what you were going for

regreted February 3 2011, 15:42:14 UTC

This update, was like 50 kinds of wonderful. it was gorgeous. i dont know why but when Tiffany is down like this and all contemplative, it makes me happy. And, I think, its weird because i didn't slap taek and fany with those normal judgements, like she's a sleezy sexpot, and he's a scum bag. theres something mildly twisted about your reality here, that lets me just accept these things.

i anticipate the 28th, be well until then.