fic: who i was, from the start

[darkaslay]

"I have..."Jessica searched through her unkempt freezer and found something in the back, "ice cream bars."

Tiffany was sitting on the floor, next to the refrigerator, her eyes traveling up Jessica's bare legs, watching as Jessica shifted her weight from her left leg to her right. She bit down on the inside of her cheek painfully and looked away.

Comments

[anonymous]

ROFL how is that a role play, Yul is already the man. She'd still be the man even in TaekYul :X http://tinyurl.com/2f6u4vw
That's no fun, well unless she wears mustache and other things...

Yuri's bare stomach...<\i>
no happy trial? XD

...Tiff T-T stop beating yourself

[rachelconrad]

I would like to slide my tongue up and down that fine piece of meat! :O

[darkaslay]

AND THE TRUTH COMES OUT :P

[rachelconrad]

OMGGGGG you're finally back! My days are lonely without you... Where did you go...? I think I'm gonna cry in joy.

[wazzzabii]

shbleeee!!

jeti happens...and then you take it away! my face was literally like D: the whole time during their part!

i think you have a thing for being evil to your readers!

but then again you come back with awesome yoonyul and hints of more jeti to come so it's all good! haha

[darkaslay]

From so long ago, but I gotta reply!

Take a look at the new chapter (if you're still interested xD) for some more JeTi :]

[anonymous]

Amazing writing as usual. The angsty JeTi relationship is just so asdfjkl, just love all their interactions whether it be hostile or hot lol. Two chapters ago I thought fany was breaking down her barriers for the first time, but all the sudden they're RIGHT BACK UP and it's just so right too, it's so in character for her to pull back -- which really sets your writing apart from most fics where characters just lose their identity once the pairing gets together and the story goes into fluff mode. But ugh Tiffany is so broken now and it's again both painful and wonderful at the same time to see her like this.

A small criticism if I may (please don't get me wrong cause I'm a HUGE fan of your writing), but in the previous chapter when JeTi finally gets it on, I don't think the build up was quite right. I totally get the feel that you were working for and I think it really would have worked as a scene in a movie or TV with picture to fill in the detail, but I felt it was a little bit too spontaneous for Tiffany to go for Jessica.So after

[darkaslay]

(Forever ago, I know, but maybe you might still catch it ><)

Actually, I agree with you on JeTi's pacing. It was a little bit too "Whoa, where did that come from?" I tried to build up that tension, but something just didn't fit. I couldn't really capture what I wanted to with that scene unfortunately, but maybe, like you said, on screen it would've fit better?

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the constructive crit.

[irishlittlewisk]

I was "yes!" JeTi finally made sex!
Who I was kidding with characters like Jessi and Fany, I couldn't just expect them to be all lovey dovey, and would suck if they were hahahahaha I'm too contradictory
Fany is so afraid of a relationship which she can't control. But I guess the one who is mature in this relationship is Jessi.

"Tiffany. Tiffany's perfume, lotion, just Tiffany was all over Jessica's bed."

Why they can't just admit they are crazy for each other, because darkaslay (yes, you!) never takes the easy way.

I loved this last YoonYul scene, I want more!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

I can't never ever look again at Tiffany without having "She's a Genius" playing on my head.

Of course I like hot sex between JeTi, but I'm craving a sweet, vulnerable moment much more now.

[darkaslay]

Delay time of forever, I'm sorry!

Lovey dovey JeTi is just not in their cards for this fic. But they can be sweet, just you watch. Thank you for the comment. I know I've been MIA, but I can never overlook the happiness I get from a comment :]

[driftaway143]

Sometimes I wish this wasn't pg13.... and this is what reading too many r-rated fics does to a human

JeTi.... What the hell....? I knew it wouldn't be that easy but seriously back to square one x_x (or is it?)

["If this is some kind of roleplay you and Yoona are doing, then I don't want to know."] - Favourite line haha!

[darkaslay]

You're not the only one who wishes this wasn't pg-13 xD

JeTi will continuing to rock back and forth between "squares," so to speak. Thank you for the comment and sorry for the delay!