(Fic) Scar tissue that I wish you saw (sarcastic mister know it all)

Dec 05, 2009 22:06

Disclaimer:I don't own any of the characters featured in this fic, it's just a bit of fun, don't sue me!
Title: Scar tissue that I wish you saw (sarcastic mister know it all)
Pairing(s): Sam/Dean
Rating(s): R (Hard)
Warning(s): Pre-Series, Underage (Sam is 14), Consensual Incest, Language, Angst and UN-BETA’DSummary: But he nods because he knows ( Read more... )

supernatural, rating: r, underage, fic, pairing: sam/dean, spn

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theoneandonlylj December 6 2009, 04:54:33 UTC
this was really good!
few grammatical errors but still so good!

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darkangelazure December 6 2009, 12:15:07 UTC
Ugh I know I can never get my grammar pitch perfect i usually use a beta but I just wanted to get this up, being nearly over 12 weeks since I posted something and I just got impatient LOL

But thank you commenting!

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theoneandonlylj December 6 2009, 19:56:38 UTC
I know how you feel. I am always available to beta if you need one and I am not too too busy.

And of course! I <3 it!

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darkangelazure December 7 2009, 10:51:07 UTC
I'd love to take you up on your offer!

my e-mail address is disturbedfreak616@googlemail.com

or disturbed487@hotmail.com if you have hotmail :)

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the_dean_team December 6 2009, 07:21:43 UTC
I feel like doing some laundry! ...I liked the way you described Dean's smell...

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darkangelazure December 6 2009, 12:21:46 UTC
I'd defiantly like to do laundry while Sam and Dean are doing it LOL! I just kinda think that's the way Dean would smell, but most common is usually leather because he practically sleeps with that jacket on!

Just glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting!

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smash86 December 6 2009, 11:17:14 UTC
Awesome imagery...luvs the details and the way we see Dean from Sam's POV...

"But he kisses Sam like they invented it"...I think that's my favourite!!

*hugz*

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darkangelazure December 6 2009, 12:23:45 UTC
Thank you I'm glad you thought so, sometimes I kinda thought I'd gone into too much of a tangent but wanted to throw it out being changing my writing style up a bit, so I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you so much for commenting!

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epicallytired December 6 2009, 17:30:04 UTC
this has potential but there are so many misspelled words, grammatical errors and non Americanisms that it's very hard to read.

An American beta would do wonders for you.

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darkangelazure December 7 2009, 10:57:43 UTC
I'm really pleased you think the fic has potential!

I have had someone to beta, so when thats sent off and sent back I can post it up :)

When I finished it I just had to post it straight away, it had been 12 weeks since I posted a single thing so I was a little over excited lol!

Thank you for commenting!

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jjinmo_356 December 6 2009, 19:47:12 UTC
This was wonderful, Dean only going so far as Sam wants, beautifully written

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darkangelazure December 7 2009, 10:54:32 UTC
Thank you!

It's always being the same with those two!

I'm just glad you thought I did a good enough job to warrant a comment thank you very much!

:)

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