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burgandybaby September 17 2011, 20:33:07 UTC
Fucking shit.
Damn.
I am so dead, I can't even say...
I sat here with my hand over my mouth at points just like O___O.
The thought of Colt being so dom and Punk just being so subject to his control is just the living fucking end. And it is just so TRUE that there is no debating otherwise.

Punk let out a breathy moan, his body tensing briefly before he relaxed completely and Colt knew if he could see Punk's face, there would be a look of complete bliss on it.
DEAD.

Pulling back on his head, Colt leaned down and bit his throat, smirking at the low moan Punk gave. He ran his tongue over the deep imprint he left in Punk's neck.
Wait Colt, lemme make sure you're doing that right...

The stinging pain from Colt hitting the cuts on his ass was just the edge Punk needed to counter point the brutal pleasure of Colt hitting his prostate repeatedly. He needed both for sex to be worth doing; needed that extra edge of pain filled pleasure for him to completely let go of everything when when he came.
Ummm, yes please.

Colt moved his left ( ... )

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darkangel_0410 September 17 2011, 21:40:14 UTC
Aw, thanks, chickie :)

Dude, the first time I laid eyes on Punk, I knew he was a kinky motherfucker. And I've always seen Colt as a dom, despite how goffy he is. The way he looks at Punk some times, you know there's more under the surface that most people don't see.

There were times when I had to stop and have a smoke while I was writing it, lol. I just went and wrote the hottest the thing I could think of. Turns out, my mind's a pretty dirty place to be. Who knew, lol.

Thanks, again, for reading and for egging me on while I was writing it.

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burgandybaby September 18 2011, 15:59:59 UTC
Ha ha! I knew your mind's a dirty place to be! And it was definitely fun to hype you up as you wrote this. Smutty!SCS is the truth and everyone needs to know it. I have an idea or two floating around in my mind that I need to jot down soon-- he have to keep this mess going! :D

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burgandybaby September 18 2011, 16:01:11 UTC
I mean *we

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enigmatic_raven September 17 2011, 21:46:16 UTC
OMG Just love this. I totally agree, if Punk were to have a kink, it'd be pain.

I love how he tested Cabana, wanted to make sure he'd never leave him, that he could trust him with his deepest, darkest secret.

And....Colt dominating Punk? Never really pictured it before, but, now that it's written so wonderfully before me....I can't not picture it!

The blood play, Colt fucking Punk....amazing. Just loved it! Love these two together and just loved this one! Great job!

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darkangel_0410 September 17 2011, 22:48:57 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

He looks like he'd have a hardcore pain kink, doesn't he? See, I've always pictured them switching it up, but you're not the only one who's said they usually think of Colt on the bottom. For me, there's just something about Colt that says dom to me. He's got something under the surface that's just waiting to take a bite out of someone.

Thanks again for reading.

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enigmatic_raven September 18 2011, 02:59:12 UTC
You're welcome, it was great! :)

He really does look like he'd love pain. See, I could see them switching it up, but, for Colt to be a dom....I never thought of him that way....until I read this. Now...now I can see it...very interesting.....

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darkangel_0410 September 18 2011, 03:09:46 UTC
Punk's a kinky fucker, I'd lay money on it. Thanks, that's a great compliment :D

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messyjessy08 September 17 2011, 22:28:54 UTC

Should I say alla this again? I don't even care, I will. I Loved it! Boom-boom was so darrrk! And that shit is sexy. Punk's kinkiness likewise = fucking hot.

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darkangel_0410 September 17 2011, 23:16:01 UTC
Thanks for commenting again, lol. It was pissing me off so bad before.

Colt is fucken hot, no matter what's going on. And Punk is a kinky fucker, I'd bet money on it.

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rfg_72 September 19 2011, 02:22:09 UTC
This was perfect. I agree that Punk would probably be open to just about anything in the bedroom, and it just makes so much sense for him to have a deep pain kink. And yes, Cabana is a dom. He's too self assured and willing to make fun of himself and the rest of the world to be anything but dominant. Would love to read more of this couple/verse. Thanks!

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darkangel_0410 September 19 2011, 03:31:49 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :) Punk is one of my all time favorites to write; he's such a complicated person in rl, that you can write him so many different ways. And his releationship with Colt is so out od character for the way Punk acts in public... It's a writer's dream, lol. Finally! Someone else who looks at Colt and see's a dom! Thank you, lol.

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retroginger January 14 2012, 05:57:28 UTC
I'm glad you reposted this:) I totally missed it the first time around. I love how conflicted Punk is in the beginning, but then eventually gives in to Colt.

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darkangel_0410 January 14 2012, 13:26:51 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you were able to find it this time around, lol.

Punk's need to test people is painfully obvious -well, to me & imo, lol- and I don't think that would change, not even for his bff.

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retroginger January 14 2012, 16:22:25 UTC
Yeah, I don't think I was reading Punk/Colt slash when you originally posted it. I'm glad I took the time to read it this time:)

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