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darkangel_0410 June 20 2011, 15:57:42 UTC
Chris is hugging him! Among other things *snickers and leers*

Excuse me, I think I just had two mini heart attacks. Did you just say Evvy needs a smack AND that your heart is breaking for Punk?! *shakes head in disbelief*

Well, technically, it's not Evvy's fault. But I will say that eventually he stops being such a tard.

Aren't they? I just love the two of them together.

As soon as I can get it written, I promise!

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darkangel_0410 June 20 2011, 18:25:41 UTC
My fault? Well, I'd apologize, but we both know I wouldn't mean it, lol. John doesn't have the heart to give him the smack he needs, but Evvy does get it -metaphorically speaking. As for Punk, see, he's not that bad. Is he?

LoL. Of course Josh has to defend him ;)

Aw, thanks, sweetie *hugs*

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energy_purple June 20 2011, 18:52:03 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! It's up it's up it's up!!!!

You have absolutely no idea how much I loved this chapter! It was tense, it was emotional, it was dark and broody, yet most of all, you could feel the love and the protective nature of everybody who was featured. I love how you write the bond between each pair of mates, and how they all retain their uniqueness.

Oh my God, I just wanted to give Alex such a huge hug! It just breaks my heart how much Evan's words have affected him, and how he thinks that he's still a monster even though Chris has tried everything in his power to prove him otherwise. I adore just how protective and adoring Chris is of Alex when he's obviously feeling so vulnerable, you can really feel just how much Chris loves Alex and how much he adores him, even despite the things that Alex had done in the past. You can't help but let your heart utterly melt at the strength of their connection and relationship; it really is just such a thing of beauty :) <3 ( ... )

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rfg_72 June 21 2011, 04:45:02 UTC
Somehow you fell off my f-list and I lost track. So I just read like the past 6 or 7 chapters catching up. This is awesome. I really like how you've brought Punk in, with the whole idea of him having lost Colt and being totally unconcerned with his own life these days. Evan is going to get the shit kicked out of John if he doesn't watch it. I wish Chris could beat him!!! And basically I agree with the other posts. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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