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[Fic]: Braid

Oct 29, 2010 20:46

Title: Braid
Author: dark_puck
Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender
Characters: Team Avatar, Long Feng, Hyo (OC)
Rating: G/K
Word Count: 999
Prompt: Burn
Summary: While travelling with Team Avatar, Long Feng helps Hyo with his hair.
Notes: Because even the Cultural Minister can be domestic sometimes. Id-fic, WAFF.

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character: aang, character: hyo, fandom: avatar, character: long feng, character: katara, character: toph, character: sokka

Comments 2

beckyh2112 December 30 2010, 02:38:31 UTC

This is cute. <3 I like the bit of "one or five doujinshi". Long Feng brushing Hyo's hair is sweet and domestic, and I like how that naturally flowed into story-telling for the kids and Sokka's foot-in-mouth. I like that Long Feng's contributions to the story were very minimal - he doesn't seem like the type who wants to tell stories, if that makes sense.

Katara is sweet. <3

dark_puck January 11 2011, 19:07:50 UTC

Thank you! <3 It's always best to weave bits of stories together, and you know I love the doujin. >.>

And Hyo's a daddy. He is always ready to share a tale -- especially when that means it might alter perceptions towards his boss favourably. :D Meanwhile I suspect Long Feng would let the children find out from records or something before he'd do storytime.

She really is. I suspect she likes Hyo -- he's fatherly and kind and takes care of his daughter and why is such a man Dai Li anyway?

....oh.