Because my Jazz muse is insistent

[dark_daebereth]

He threatened me with Katy Perry again, so I did as I was bid and wrote a follow up to Last Perfect Verse.

Title: All That’s Done’s Forgiven
Rating: PG (for the idealogically sensitive) - adds in a tentative tissue warning
Pairings, Characters: Jazz/Prowl.
Summary: It wasn’t just Jazz that the saboteur’s glitch was eating away at. Follow up to One

Comments

[prowlsgirl]

Awww poor Jazz and Prowl.

[dark_daebereth]

They live to send me in tears. Thanks for reading!

[rainlightautumn]

D=

WAHHHHHHHHHH.

That was so GOOD. And so heartbreaking! They live to hurt us!

Speaking as someone who has been in a similar situation recently, you got the feelings just perfect, love. I was totally feeling for Prowl, and the poor mech trying to be strong... ;-;

I like the ending a lot. It's so fragging sad and somewhat hopeless.

Maybe Prowl will stop being sad, now? And mayhap Jazz will cooperate?

...

BAHAHAHAHAAA.

Anyways, wonderful job, darling. It made me wince, but in a totally good way. <3

[dark_daebereth]

I swear, the headlines will say "Author killed from heart broken by muses." In which case, I want my headstone to say "Jazz made me do it."

Oh, I'm so glad I got it right. It's not somewhere I've been myself, but the muses sort of write these things themselves. resist urge to mention simulacra, resist, resist!!!

Prowl tries so hard. What can he do, really? I snapped when he realised that loving Jazz wasn't going to make a difference. ;_; And yay for my hapless ending, I didn't know what to make of it. Hopeless is right, they both know what end is coming and that it's not a happy one.

Jazz, co-operate? ROFL! I wish >_> But yes, hopefully they'll let me work on the Beast now. Sorry fraggers, love em so!

Thankyou so much petal. <3

[dark_daebereth]

*nods* And it kind of is, kind of isn't. I mean, schizophrenia wouldn't normally be terminal, but in a sense, it is...

Thankyou petal. Glad you liked it, even with the angst. *joins the hugs*

[okami_myrrhibis]

Awww - damn.. so sad. And not part of 'Cide? too bad.

[dark_daebereth]

Yeah, alas. But! Love for providing me with an abbreviation for the AU, Romanticide was becoming such a mouthful and I was at a loss! *hugs* :D

Thanks for reading!

[eerian_sadow]

oh, gods. poor, poor mechs.

i think this was probably how my grandmother was feeling over the course of my grandfather's alzheimer's disease. i'm not sure i would be strong enough to deal with that.

[dark_daebereth]

They really do go through the Pit, don't they.

No, I don't think I would be able to either. And I think Prowl's having his doubts. *hugs* Thanks for reading!

[eerian_sadow]

they really, really do.

prowl's right to be having his doubts about his own strenghth; its a hard thing to do.