Ch. 2 of "The Lost King"

[dark_angel_isla]

Meh...I figured out what I did wrong in my last post. I meant to have it link to the post on my page, but that didn't seem to happen, so I'll make sure it happens this time.

Title: The Lost King; ch. 2-Delay...
Author: D.A.I.
Pairing: Peter/Caspian
Genre: Romance/Angstiness
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1,035
Summary: After returning home from Narnia for

Comments

[toril_arranac]

Nice work. I like how Peter corrects himself when thinking of Cas--er, Narnia.

[dark_angel_isla]

Yes, that is your sole contribution. Thank you for commenting on your one and only (you know I'm kidding). Thanks, hon.

[jademercy]

Poor Lucy...I'm going to guess its nothing minor, cause, otherwise, what's the point in putting it in the story? Peter has anger issues...but i suppose that's understandable.

[dark_angel_isla]

Lol, yeah. He's pretty angsty in this story.

[justmyteacup]

i get that peter is upset! i want him to go back to narnia too! but i don't like that he's going around smacking edmund! felt like smacking him myself!

poor thing... i hope lucy has nothing serious! but it's going to be isn't it?

*hugs*

[dark_angel_isla]

Yeah, ironically enough, I don't like Peter very much either in this story. My fav character is Edmund and I promise not to hurt him again.

[dark_angel_isla]

Yay! Awesome, thanks. Yeah, I come in late sometimes too and I love it when people put links to the other chapters.