The Golden King: Fuck

[dariuswolfe]

So I'm stuck on the very last chapter of my book. The below is an attempt to outline the people and relationships and try to clear it up for myself. Do not read this if you do not want spoilers.

Comments

[fierinferno]

Here's what's up from me. I have a slight preference to not read this because I'd like to see how the story wraps up naturally. However, if you posted this because you need help, and you would like my help, just say the word and I'm all over it. Helping you is much more important than reading a book exactly the way I want to.

I'm only even posting this because I suspect once you get some time away from it the ending will fall into place for you, but if it doesn't, I'm here.

[lxndr]

what about a third party? I can see Kalatro brashly pointing out the 'obvious' interest they have for one another, which might force them to face it or otherwise deal with it while they're around each other, an elephant sitting in the middle of the room...

I'm probably not the best person to ask about this, since I'm not all that good in expressing interest in real life.