Five Acts

[daria234]

The Five Acts Meme -- ahh, I've missed this

Comments

[coffeethyme4me]

I missed this!!!!

Okay, um, am I doing this right?

Peter/Neal -- spanking WHILE fucking

Yes??

[coffeethyme4me]

Clearly, I am not understanding this corrently. LMAO!

I'M supposed to write for YOU, not ask you to write for me. LMFAO!!!!!!

Epic fucking funny fail!!

pt 1

[daria234]

LOL that's okay - are you doing the meme? random ppl and friends both can write for you and you write for others, etc

pt 2

[daria234]

Besides, if Neal insisted on Peter taking his ass every single time they slept together ... it's not like Peter had motivation to question that. He probably should have felt a little bad for not caring enough to pursue why, for letting this one thing go without interrogation, but even Peter couldn't object. And Peter didn't certainly didn't have a problem with hard work. After all, he was always telling Neal how important it is to earn what you get

Re: pt 2

[coffeethyme4me]

Oh. My. Dear. GAWD!!!!!!

I so did not deserve this BEAUTIFUL, PERFECT THING this morning! LOL!

What I love about your writing is that the psychology is right on but also freshly worded and it never EVER detracts from the sex; it adds to it!

Plus, this is just dirty beyond my wildest expectations. Thank you for the spanking, for Neal loving it, for Peter coming on his back, and dear God for licking it onto his front. WOW.

Re: pt 2

[daria234]

:) Glad you liked!! And I think comeplay is an underrated fanfic trope lol

*goes to check out your fic*

Re: pt 2

[coffeethyme4me]

Also, give me a little time and I'll do this right and write for YOU!!! ;-) :-)

Re: pt 2

[photoash]

This is awesome <3 love how sexy and relaxed they are with one another here <3

Re: pt 2

[daria234]

Thanks!! :)

Re: pt 2

[secretsolitaire]

Mmm, yes, this hit a few kinks for me as well! :-)

Re: pt 2

[daria234]

Thank you!!! :)