Comments | daria234: White Collar ficlet (for afiawri's birthday)

daria234

White Collar ficlet (for afiawri's birthday)

Feb 27, 2011 18:14

Happy Birthday Afiawri! I may be busy on your actual b-day, so I am posting now. I did not have time to do as long (or as wonderful!) a fic as you and Ash got me for my birthday, but I hope you like this. I wasn't sure what to write at first so I took inspiration from your 5 acts meme ( Read more... )

kink, slash, peter burke, white collar, moz, neal caffrey, el burke

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photoash February 28 2011, 00:23:32 UTC

This are AWESOME <3 I am always so blown away by everything you write and these are all so sweet and fun :D I laughed out loud at parts <3

I really liked that Neal was anxious about kink and nervous :) and that Alex was in bed with them (not a pairing I've ever seen - three/foursome with the burkes there!) and then with Mozzie.

Mozzie was my favorite :D oh Neal smiled. "Peter got sick of you quoting people during foreplay, didn't he?" made me laugh so hard then Mozzie calling Neal on thinking Mozzie wasn't getting any :D heeee! I love that Neal wanted to help but in the end Mozzie was fine without it :)

always wonderful to see more writing by you!!!

daria234 March 2 2011, 23:55:18 UTC

Aw, thanks!!! For the comment and for being supportive the whole way!!!

hoosierbitch February 28 2011, 04:42:51 UTC

Brilliant. :)

Love the different views of the relationships, but how it's still so connected!!!

<3 <3 <3 <3

daria234 February 28 2011, 20:09:40 UTC

:) Thanks!!!!!

misura February 28 2011, 17:06:35 UTC

Oh that last one just took the cake and ate it, too, because it was just so - hee! (And definitely not a pairing I've seen done very often before, either.)

Loved all three, though, from Neal discovering the kinkier sides of the Burke's nupital arrangements to his having coffee with Alex to, well, Mozzie and Peter. In a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g.

daria234 February 28 2011, 20:10:24 UTC

Hee, your comment made made giggle. I can just picture Neal singing the k-i-s-s-i-n-g song at them. And them giving identical frowns of warning.

afiawri February 28 2011, 17:09:28 UTC

I absolutely adore it!

Your style's a bit different here and it really works on this fic. I love being absolutely thrown by it at every turn (though if I'd thought to read the header, I'd have seen the Alex thing coming.)

Thank you, thank you! This is an awesome birthday gift. I love Peter's little collection of lovers here. <3

daria234 February 28 2011, 20:09:21 UTC

:) So glad you like it.

Have a terrific birthday!!!!