Wow, I have been wanting BN slash/threesome since Jesse came on board, and you've not only given me M/J/F, you've given me the perfect bondage scenario.
I love that you've made this a full relationship arc...I hope you'll write more (in between great WC fic).
I slashed J/M even when Jesse was just this distant character we knew nothing about, but I was surprised how much I loved J/Fiona. Though to be fair, I tend to slash at the first hint.
Example: I shipped Peter and Neal before WC started, just from the commercials. I originally thought El was Peter's boss and was disappointed to find she was the wife (until I watched the show, saw that she was kind of both the boss AND the wife, and was totally spectacular to boot).
I think someone wrote a Michael/Neal series. Though what I really want is fic based on those promos/commercials where Peter walks by and sees a grenade fall out of Fi's purse. :)
As for who's toppier... yeah, you ask the BEST questions :) I would love for the two of them to find out.
Wow - I've made it pretty well known that I'm not a huge fan of Jesse, but the way you handled the three of them coming together, the sensuality of it and how they bonded together, was really lovely and IC. Good work!
Thanks so much!! I totally ship them even though I wonder if J is what he seems or not (in canon). I love that he brings out the guilt!angst in Michael too.
Oh my God, this is absolutely incredible. Your characterisation of Jesse is exactly how I see him and how the show should have portrayed him. He's insecure and scared and filled with rage underneath his relatively calm exterior. His world has been turned upside down and he’s trying to make sense of it all. I especially enjoyed the theme of trust in this story. Making that the baseline for Jesse’s motivations and emotions not only led to believable characterization, it made the sex scenes even more erotic. I found the build up to be quite hot as well. And then once they do have him tied up, they don’t get straight into the sex, the three of them become playful! It was so cute and sweet and made the resulting scenes even sexier because you built further on the trust between them
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thanks so much for your detailed and lovely comments!! Your feedback was so nice and I'm so glad those parts of the story worked for you.
I agree that Jesse is pretty mad and scared right now; I hope he doesn't go all crazy when he finds out whose fault his burn was. For the show (but not in this fic of course), I tinhat that he already has figured it out and that he's okay with it. Or he's waiting to see what he feels. :)
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I love that you've made this a full relationship arc...I hope you'll write more (in between great WC fic).
Thank you!
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I slashed J/M even when Jesse was just this distant character we knew nothing about, but I was surprised how much I loved J/Fiona. Though to be fair, I tend to slash at the first hint.
Example: I shipped Peter and Neal before WC started, just from the commercials. I originally thought El was Peter's boss and was disappointed to find she was the wife (until I watched the show, saw that she was kind of both the boss AND the wife, and was totally spectacular to boot).
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As for who's toppier... yeah, you ask the BEST questions :) I would love for the two of them to find out.
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Just a warning. ;)
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Thanks so much for commenting!!
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I agree that Jesse is pretty mad and scared right now; I hope he doesn't go all crazy when he finds out whose fault his burn was. For the show (but not in this fic of course), I tinhat that he already has figured it out and that he's okay with it. Or he's waiting to see what he feels. :)
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