ficlet - Sentences are overrated (originally posted June '07)

[dare_to_dream06]

Title: Sentences are overrated.
Author: dare_to_dream06
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 134
Summary: Grinding down, grinding up. Moans of pleasure. Clothes disguarded, skin on skin.
Authors Notes: Just a wee-ficlet :)

Comments

[prettiful_pout]

That honestly had my heartstrings pulling out soft pitched "Awes!"
So short and sweet and gah *hearts this and you*
You rox mah sox *glomps you*

[dare_to_dream06]

*catches you and twirls you 'round*
YAY
so glad you thought so.
=)
it makes me smile, because i didnt even know what the hell i was doing back then. lmao.
=)
happy that i have your approval though. :P
*hugs*

[pippii]

This is so sweet and cute.
Diffrent style, but really great.

Have I read it somewhere before??

[dare_to_dream06]

thanks darling.
and you probably have, i posted it originally in june '07 but i posted it to the comm and i didnt have it in my journal, so last night i found it (if you read the explaination at the beginning lol) and posted it to my journal so people who havent seen it could read it =)
glad you did like it though. !

[angieobsessed]

I like it. You wrote it completely different and I like it. you should write more like this. it was sweet and cute and ...
loved it. *hugs*

[dare_to_dream06]

thank you!
glad you have an open mind. lol
i may write more of this, i really like the style.
i'll think about it. =)

[kes1807]

You have made my day with this, loved it, so sweet and cute and happy.

I think I read this when it was originally posted but not sure if I commented, but it was certainly worth reading again.

*Hugs*

[dare_to_dream06]

you probably already read it.
but thanks for commenting darling.
=)
i'm thinking about writing some more of this. =)

*hugs*

[kes1807]

Oh yes! that would be great, like now?

I'm waiting patiently, *lol*

*hugs*

[dare_to_dream06]

It was actualy one of the first things i've ever written.
imagine that.
lol.
but thank you. i'm very glad you liked it. =)