Comments | dare_challenge: VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF

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VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF

Sep 01, 2006 22:35

Title: Vexed, Perplexed, and Just Plain Pissed Off
Written By: beathen
Timeline: Indeterminate except for the fact that Brian has opened Kinnetik (so really it’s an extremely vague, early Season 4)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sometimes a reward outweighs the frustration it takes to achieve it.
Author Notes: A heartfelt and grateful thank you to my betas: besame_bj, shadownyc, ( Read more... )

Comments 37

VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF fansee September 6 2006, 02:42:25 UTC

I love love love how this fic starts, with Brian admitting he wants Justin around all the time, then getting pissed off at all the mess Justin brings into his life. Very realistic! FanSee

Re: VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF shadownyc September 10 2006, 16:14:19 UTC

ITA!
Totally IC, too. :)

Re: VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF beathen September 10 2006, 17:39:18 UTC

I'm so happy that their characters were believable! Thanks for this!

Re: VEXED, PERPLEXED, AND JUST PLAIN PISSED OFF shadownyc September 10 2006, 17:51:21 UTC

My pleasure.

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jillapet September 7 2006, 20:11:06 UTC

Yay! The true meaning of dare fic! The intervention was hysterical.

beathen September 10 2006, 17:40:19 UTC

The true meaning of dare fic!

*blushes* Thank you so much!! You have no idea how happy that comment makes me. I'm glad you liked it!

lipsofpoison September 9 2006, 20:58:30 UTC

The playful side of B/J is written all over this fic, under the frustration and hilarity that is. The idea that Brian would make a dare on something thats bee mentioned in canon (I'm right here, right?) is just so perfect. And what Justin wants in return...heck, we all want that one.

The scene with Debbioe just crakced me up. So eaily he forgets. And dealing with Ted without insults...concept! And Michaels concern...just perfect. And Justin talking dirty is very cannon season four him.

And the face everyone thinks he's sick...so true. And the ending was perfect.

beathen September 10 2006, 17:41:49 UTC

I had a lot of fun writing the different character's perspectives in this! And the dirty talk was so enjoyable to write.

And the ending was perfect.

Thank you!

eileen_donovan September 10 2006, 19:15:09 UTC

I'm so proud of you, Elizabeth! This fic came out *so* well! And, even though I knew from the start how it would end, I loved reading it once again and watching that moment slowly come over the horizon! There's nothing quite so satisfying as Brian and Justin together, in the loft, where they belong!

It was a wonderful idea, well executed, and you stayed in character throughout. You did a GREAT job with this. Write more, okay? Soon?

beathen September 10 2006, 19:26:48 UTC

Thank you so much! And thanks for all your help, too; it wouldn't have been as good without your valuable assistance!

I'll definately write more soon... I just have to find the right story idea that I can run with. Thank goodness that qaf_challenges is starting soon. Hopefully I'll get some good ideas from that!

vlredreign September 13 2006, 18:04:34 UTC

Yay!!! Go Brian! I knew he could do it, but I was worried in the end. I hate it that so many people feel like they can just butt into his life the way the "family" does. This was great!

beathen September 13 2006, 18:19:55 UTC

Thanks! And yeah, I get annoyed at how nosy the family can be. Part of me thinks they do it just because they like pushing Brian's hot buttons.