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Fallen Leaves, Chapter 2

Jul 17, 2011 21:46

-Fallen Leaves-
-Chapter 2-

Author: DaraDaraDara12
Pairing: JaeMin
Genre: Horror, Romance, AU
Length: Chaptered
Rating: P-13
Warnings: Character death, gore, violence

Summary: A disease has spread worldwide and the world plunges into darkness. Changmin struggles for his life, constantly running around to stay alive. Can Jaejoong save him and make him ( Read more... )

title: fallen leaves, pairing: jeamin, genre: horror, lenght: chaptered

Comments 10

jaceni July 18 2011, 02:54:25 UTC

SPOT!!! ^_____^

jaceni July 18 2011, 17:02:28 UTC

OMG!!! I still can't believe he did that!!! I literally gasped aloud when I read that and had my roommate shush me because I was too loud. XD This was a very thrilling chapter and had me on edge throughout. Those things definitely would put anyone on edge and it's scary how they waited for Yunho to turn. I wonder if there is something more to them waiting for another zombie like thing so patiently or if it's just their nature...

Really enjoyed this chapter. It was awesome, especially that little surprise you threw with Junsu. I understand Changmin though, when you're desperate you do things that you wouldn't think you're capable of. The ironic thing was that he had already had in mind that he would be the next to be sacrificed, yet when the time came he chose to sacrifice Junsu instead. XD

I really feel sorry for the characters in this universe and can't wait to find out who (I think it's Jae, but you never know ^^) was the one who caught Changmin before he fell. Oh, really can't wait! ^____^

daradaradara12 July 24 2011, 02:30:00 UTC

Yep, Min really meant to protect Junsu, but he had to sacrifice Su or sacrifice the both of them. He was desperate, and his survival instincts kicked in...

I can't tell who caught Min, but I do can tell you both Jaejae and Chunnie will be introduced in the next chapter!

Thanks for reading and commenting! X3

crimson_miharu July 18 2011, 04:11:17 UTC

SPOT 4 LATER!

crimson_miharu July 18 2011, 10:42:01 UTC

O.O He abandoned Junsu...I totally didn't see that one happening at ALL! Poor SuSu..
I'm shocked I thought he would stick with Su until the end not just drop him and flee. SOmething bit his arm O.o and wtf I thought his dad was dead? Oh man update soon cause the ending was totally confusing!

daradaradara12 July 24 2011, 02:34:05 UTC

The ending was probably confusing for you, since Changmin was very confused and you get his point of view.

Poor Junsu is dead... T__T Please, don't hate Changmin for it. Survival instincts are strong, and he had to save his life. Junsu would have weighted him down, so that's why he dropped him...

Who saved Changmin? You'll see in the next chapter!!!

Thanks for reading!!!

crimson_miharu July 24 2011, 02:35:50 UTC

Oh I dont hate Min I was just shocked...can't wait until the next chapter!

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whatifgirl86 July 18 2011, 07:20:52 UTC

OMG, interesting chapter. I definitely knew that Yunho was going to die, but Junsu came as a surprise. What a sad way to go though. But it is understandable because the instinct to save yourself is strong, but still caught me by surprise. Even after Junsu twisted his ankle it didn't click in my brain that Changmin was going to leave him, and when he threw him on the ground I thought it was to protect him since he was injured, guess I was very wrong^^ Junsu must have felt awful, to be helpless and abandoned.

I wonder what bit Changmin in the end.

daradaradara12 July 24 2011, 02:38:37 UTC

I was really mean to Junsu. It must be terrible to die left behing by someone you love and trust with creepy creatures out to eat you... But Changmin had to save his own life...

Thanks for commenting and reading! Look forward to the next chapter!