Comments | dapper_prose: Vesper, interlude 2

dapixam_q in dapper_prose

Vesper, interlude 2

Nov 08, 2008 15:55

Title: Vesper
Fandom/Pairing: Twilight, Edward/Bella
Rating: PG-13
Category: Romance, Drama
Spoilers: AU, but there are references to all four books. You'll probably just glance over them if you haven't read BD, however.
Summary: In an alternate universe, the Cullens stayed in Alaska for three more years than in the books, so Bella spends the end of her ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, edward/bella, twilight, wc: 50000+, epic vesper

Comments 3

wm_law2003 November 9 2008, 00:28:29 UTC

That was gorgeous! Love!!

jacquet November 10 2008, 00:38:42 UTC

you should post this in esmecarlisle :)

that_writr November 12 2008, 10:13:16 UTC

This was lovely. You go the attitude and language, I think! Wow! I liked Esme's fighting spirit here. Also, and although it belongs to chapt. 10, I liked bella saying she felt like a battered wife, cleaning up Jacob's mess. Yay! Not that I dislike Jacob, but just in general, Balla's passivity in the books have bothered me. I've tried to address that myself with an older (women's studies major!) Bella.

But I was also going to say on Carlisle ... I love Carlisle stories. He's mu guilty pleasure E/B shipper that I am. So on a different note, have you read Minisinoo's "This Is My Beloved Son"? It's an awesome historical "Why Carlisle turned Edward" story. I thought you might like it, given the historical element you had here. No Esme in it, but still, it's sort of my personal canon for Carlisle and Edward.