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Challenge#2: Love Lost

Apr 10, 2010 12:51

Title: Gone
Author: SignCherie
Rating: E
Pairing: Gorim/fem!Aeducan
Summary: Gorim will never forget his lady...

( Just hold me one last time, she says. )

character: aeducan, challenge 2, challenge love lost, fic, character: gorim

Comments 5

silksieve April 10 2010, 18:36:36 UTC

This was so poignant and heartbreaking! I loved it.

signcherie April 10 2010, 20:21:41 UTC

Thank you very much!

payroo April 11 2010, 16:11:07 UTC

:'( This made me so sad... stupid Gorim! I love your Aeducan's smooth handling of the situation. In my Aeducan game I couldn't resist the petty bitchy dialogue options, heh.
But anyway, I feel you've plausibly captured Gorim's emotions and rationale very well. Nice work!

signcherie April 11 2010, 22:16:21 UTC

Oh, I'm sure I was just as petty and bitchy in game. Bastard broke my heart! Luckily, in fiction I can write whatever I want. Glad you liked it!

zauar April 12 2010, 02:24:32 UTC

I thought the female dwarf noble was one of the best origins. I felt so moved by Gorim and Lady Aeducan's love. I was really sad when I discovered that he'd remarried in what seemed like such a short period of time.