AU Fic: For Want of a Warden, Part 7

[phoenixblaize]

This chapter is pretty short compared to the others, but it felt like a natural break. Alistair and Avelle have another little chat before we get to the introduction of the mighty Sten. That should be fun! Or violent. Or both. Who knows?

First part, second part, third part, fourth part, fifth part, sixth part.

Title: For Want of a Warden
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Comments

[fay]

Poor Morrigan. To think that Leliana is only going to show her the qunari of her dreams! 9_9;

I enjoy Avelle far too much! She seems about three minutes (or months) away from cracking completely.

Just something minor, though: There seem to be a few missed words here, e.g. "Howe the reason [you] lost whoever". I could probably find some more, but I'm far too exhausted (and am not in English-thinking mode), apologies. ~_~

[phoenixblaize]

I hope someone gets Morrigan a hot poker. She'll need it to call off Sten!

Thanks! It's hard to get roped into saving the world while you're all messed up from losing your family.

Yeah, I'm sorry about that. I didn't see that until after it was put up. I don't know how that happened. When I have the time I'll go back and fix them. There are a few here and there.

[baroque_tragedy]

Poor Avelle. ;_; I cannot imagine losing your family, and then finding out the man who killed them is setting himself up higher in the aristocracy. :/

I like the little connection starting to develop between her and Alistair, as well. I'm curious to see if it'll be romantic or platonic.

ALSO -- STEN! Am excited to see his entrance!

SOO cannot wait for more! :D