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[dannysmystarboy]

Hi This is my new Flones Story ^^
Author: Me Alicia ^^
Part-1/?
Rating:Hmm maybe pg or PG-13
Genre:as my friend Lisa has dubbed it a romcom! romantic comedy
Pairing:Flones! and minor Pudd
Disclaimer:I own nothing except for the characters I made up
Dedications:anyone that takes the time and reads this :)
A/N:Umm I will try to make this as romantic and

Comments

[fatal_scribbles]

Oh, I like this, it's a really sweet idea. I think you need to get a beta though, to check over your work before you post it, because you've made quite a few grammatical errors. Doesn't stop the story from being really cute though ♥

[dannysmystarboy]

Thank you ^^ could you help me out with the things I messed up on? if you can :)because I don't know what Im doing half the time

[gdtle1]

This is so cute, can't wait for the next chapter!

[dannysmystarboy]

Thank you! :) I thought nobody was reading this haha I already typed up to chapter 5 but didn't post them because I thought."Well since nobody is reading this I won't post it" but I did continue it on the mcfly forum so I'll post the rest of the chapters on here now :).Since you want to read the rest ^^

[gdtle1]

Aww thanks! :)

runs off to read the next few chapters

[dannysmystarboy]

Your welcome :)

thanks for reading this ^^