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dannysgirlsg1

Fic - Stolen Moments (DV)

Oct 24, 2009 19:10

So here's that fic I mentioned a few nights ago

Title: Stolen Moments
Summary: They aren't the only ones to understand stolen moments.
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Umm, none that I can think of.
A/N: Written for mission_insane , prompt: 'Stolen Kisses' (from the Fluff table). Went a kind of different way with this fic, so I hope it works. Please let me know what ( Read more... )

brabbit attacks, dv fic, flist thoughts, mission_insane, fanfic

Comments 10

magnavox_23 October 25 2009, 02:28:14 UTC

This is very sweet, and wonderful to see their relationship through Cam's eyes. Maybe just ease up on the word endin's, they're not bad, it's just a little distracting. :P

dannysgirlsg1 October 25 2009, 02:47:35 UTC

That's what I was worrying about...I felt I either had to be consistent or make it less distracting.

Thanks!

magnavox_23 October 25 2009, 04:05:22 UTC

Well that's why if I'm going to use those with Cam, It'll be within the confines of direct dialogue. POV is harder, and kudos to you for exploring that.

dannysgirlsg1 October 26 2009, 23:29:00 UTC

It's surprisingly easy to write POV Cam...it's just the debate of how far to take it. Trying to get that mix of downhome country boy and intelligent Air Force Colonel.

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dannysgirlsg1 October 26 2009, 23:29:22 UTC

Thanks!

lc59 October 25 2009, 16:47:50 UTC

Oh, thanks...I needed that...was most enjoyable...always love seeing them from an outside POV...nothing to be nervous about, worked great.

dannysgirlsg1 October 26 2009, 23:29:47 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

inperfectpeace October 26 2009, 03:12:15 UTC

Oh, that was precious! I really enjoyed the Cam pov for this. Very different, and it worked very well. I loved, loved, loved that he called Vala Princess throughout. (And I actually found the word endin's rather charming and very Cam. He is a good ol' southern boy, after all. And I say that in the fondest since, since I am a good ol' southern girl.)

dannysgirlsg1 October 26 2009, 23:32:20 UTC

I think, personally, Cam would refer to his friends in his head the same way he would out loud. Otherwise, why would he call them that to their faces? ;)

And I'm glad you found the endin's worked! That's what I was most nervous about. I felt maybe it was a bit too much. Happy it worked for you!

And thanks!

caramel_monkey October 30 2009, 10:31:31 UTC

Cute! It's nice to read fics from Cam's POV for a change. :)