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danishpinkcess

Fic: When Everything Isn't Enough (Pinkame)

Jan 13, 2010 10:00

Title: When Everything Isn't Enough
Rating: R
Pairing: Pinkame (threesome yay!)

( Jin hopes he never regrets this decision, or he would if he wasn't that drunk. )

super-idol: yamapi, super-idol: jin-what-the-fuck, craze: jpop, super-idol: kame

Comments 35

gashinenai January 13 2010, 21:13:14 UTC

oh...
wow...
just... wow...
*is totally speechless*

danishpinkcess January 13 2010, 21:22:16 UTC

Thanks!
Your speechlessness makes my speechlessness.
Just. Thanks, for your lovely comment. Sorry if I'm not very constructive, it's late.
Thanks.
And sparkles.

kawaiikame January 13 2010, 21:18:42 UTC

I don't usually read threesomes but this one was just too sweet to ignore ♥
I love their hot make out and how sweet they're towards Kame and to each other, really lovely~!!

danishpinkcess January 13 2010, 21:31:12 UTC

Thank you!
It was my first attempt at writing a threesome. Not failed, you say?
Great!
And I'm glad Kame didn't come out as a bonus figure, or something like that.
Really, thank you thank you!

kawaiikame January 13 2010, 22:02:14 UTC

Nop didn't failed at all!

Yeah most of the threesomes fics with Pi, Jin and Kame they make kame seems like the bonus one or a bitch so it was nice seeing something new like that :D

danishpinkcess January 14 2010, 07:26:56 UTC

Great. ^^ Somehow I hate it when my fics turn out creepy. And, well, I should give credit to the writers that have (unknowingly) inspired me: this fic was majorly influenced by, if I remember well, spurious, who wrote in the je_threesome community. There are severall Pinkame and I think the dynamics of my story are similar to hers.
And I am so not pimping here. Wait, I am.
Oh well, it's fine.
An~yway, I'm very happy you like it, plus it's nice to have long feedbacks afterwards.
So, thanks!

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danishpinkcess January 14 2010, 07:20:23 UTC

I'll take that as a compliment. ^^ Thanks. Gah, I'm so lame... It's early. Let's say. Wait, I'll give it another try:
Thanxxx for the comment! I love "uwah"z!
Geez, I wanna go back to sleep...

hikayuto January 14 2010, 03:09:53 UTC

Er, I don't like threesome .__." but this one's nice and I like it ^^
My English skill is bad that I can't tell you exactly what I think but your fic, uhmm, it's a bit weird and I feel it really special .__.
Uhmm, thanks for sharing.

danishpinkcess January 14 2010, 07:38:50 UTC

^^
I must say, you impress me, because this fic is quite long and you read it until the end even if English isn't your best language. Wow.
I'm sorry it seemed confusing. Maybe I'll translate it in French. Would that help? (I am still living in the illusion that some people speak French outside of here, Belgium and Switzerland. Way to go.)
Anyway, it was really nice to comment, even if you think it was weird. Actually, I like constructive comments. So, all in all, great!
Thanks again!

lonelyxlovers January 14 2010, 03:14:50 UTC

mmm, akamepi. most of the threesome fics i've read are just PWP, so i liked that you deviated from that. but the end was definitely hot.

danishpinkcess January 14 2010, 08:30:52 UTC

Before I answer ( ... )

lonelyxlovers January 14 2010, 11:57:40 UTC

YAY, KPOP! oh, it's okay, i don't think you're a stalker. i flail alot about these things too. xD

ahh, i am the same way when it comes to smut. like...it just seems awkward when i write it, i guess, it's not. well, okay, i don't know if it's not since i've never posted it but, yeah, you get the idea.

danishpinkcess January 14 2010, 17:33:47 UTC

Kpop rocks, right?!
He~!
And, yes, smut is just in bad terms with my brain. Reading it is fine. Writing is just- too- much- trouble.
But, why don't you post? I'd like to read...

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