Comments | danish_pink: First Steps To Taking Over The World (3/3)

apple_of_my in danish_pink

First Steps To Taking Over The World (3/3)

Mar 13, 2012 20:30

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fandom: sm town, fandom: f(x), fandom: kpop, pairing: amber/henry, fandom: super junior, rating: r, fic: first steps

Comments 24

chunsakuma March 13 2012, 22:32:30 UTC

Awwwh, I really enjoyed this fic. It's super-cute and detailed and has such a nice feeling~

apple_of_my March 21 2012, 08:48:28 UTC

Sorry for the delayed answer!
I was really trying to convey a happy feeling in this fic, for a change, so I'm very glad it did come across that way.
Thank you for your comment!

thyluvlyname212 March 21 2012, 04:38:24 UTC

\o/ HENBER FOREVER *W*' <3 LOVE THIS FIC & THE STYLE & EVERYTHINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG :D

apple_of_my March 21 2012, 08:33:45 UTC

THANK YOUUUUU~

riarti11 April 19 2012, 09:11:08 UTC

the ending is so beautiful <3
this is adorable <33

apple_of_my April 19 2012, 11:21:19 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

nanakkim April 19 2012, 14:53:18 UTC

I really like this fic. Usually fanfiction with loads of conversations is really hard to read for me, but this is totally exceptional. Love how you develop Amber and Henry's relationships like slowly slowly~ It's rare to see good HenBer fanfiction also ;_; Thank you for writing this fic!

apple_of_my April 19 2012, 17:30:52 UTC

I don't really like heavy dialogue in fic either, since I think it mostly slows action down, so I'm glad you think I pulled that one off. Henry/Amber is my favorite KPop couple ever, too.
Thanks a lot for commenting!

Do I spy a King HeeNim icon? Me gusta...

nanakkim April 19 2012, 20:20:59 UTC

Yes yes it's King HeeNim ♥ Are you planning to write more HenBer ? *winks* I'm rooting for you~~~ ^^ Although I knew it's non-graphic sex but I was anticipating for something more than just "‘just as she was told’ and ‘totally different in a great way'. Anyway I couldn't imagine Amber having sexy time either...so it's like "leaves room for the imagination" hahaha.
Cheers! :)

apple_of_my April 20 2012, 06:31:58 UTC

I... could be convinced to write more HenBer, but not right now, since it would be really unreasonable. I have huge, life-deciding exams in less than two weeks and I'm nowhere near ready for them. /cramming like crazy
I've two or three other fics started in addition to that and no plot for a HenBer fic at the moment, so you see, a lot of reasons why any HenBer fic would be in a month or so, I guess.
And, yes, sorry about the sex scene. It's just that, after writing them that way, I couldn't find a way to make a graphic scene coherent with the tone of voice I had given Amber. I sort of fail at writing sex anyway, I'm embarrassed and can never seem to find the right words for it. ^^
Anyway I'll do what I can, but I'm grateful for the feedback, thanks a lot!

scarredknees April 20 2012, 19:13:44 UTC

i really enjoyed the development of the characters and the general university feel of it - and authentic friendship growing into romance and ugh so much cute! ♥ i would say more but i am sleepy and incoherent. but i really liked this. (:

apple_of_my April 22 2012, 08:02:53 UTC

Thank you! I was trying really hard to develop their friendship first, and then have it lapse into romance.
(Sorry for the delayed answer btw.)