Shades of Loneliness

Apr 04, 2011 21:50

Pairing / focus: Chaerin, Chaerin / Jiyong (friendship), with several pairings (het and slash) involving Big Bang, 2NE1 and Teddy (1TYM)
Rating: PG-15 (drinking, cursing, smoking joints - i know, right)
Genre: slice-of-life AU
Summary: Chaerin's youth is a mashup of hardships and wonders.
(i'm getting better at this. no?)

Shades of Loneliness )

pairing: cl/teddy, fandom: yg family, fandom: big bang, fandom: 2ne1, rating: pg-15

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orenmanida April 5 2011, 20:07:56 UTC
can i just say there's something i really like about your writing? i like that you write "slice of life," but it's more than that--even though you write about the matter of fact happenings of cl's life, you make it interesting. at every intersection i was curious to see what would happen next, where jiyong would pop up, what texts cl would receive. even the little details--what cl hates at 14, what she packs in her bag at 19--i loved reading about because they were so relatable and fleshed her character out more. i like that you stay true to their real life personalities, at least from how i think they present themselves onstage and onscreen. and i have to say... i love the way the pairings worked out in the end, in this one. ;) thank you for sharing this! i really enjoyed it.

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apple_of_my April 5 2011, 20:14:56 UTC
should i write 'slice of life if life was a surprise burrito' instead? :D
your lovely comment made my day because i'm a sucker for detailed feedback <3

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orenmanida April 5 2011, 20:19:05 UTC
what do you know, i've been craving a good burrito all day! :)
your lovely fic and reply made mine!! ♥ and i love your icon, btw. minji is becoming so sultry these days... i forget how young she is!

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apple_of_my April 5 2011, 20:24:41 UTC
thanks! i think that's actually an old picture, found it in a magazine that was published... last year? but, yes, she's so gorgeous, and it depresses me a bit when i think she's actually younger than me...

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thyluvlyname212 April 5 2011, 20:18:53 UTC
YES :) <3 ahaha omg this fic is AWESOMEEEEEEE~ :D <3 LOVE IT :) glad that Chaerin found happiness w/ Seungri~ :D

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apple_of_my April 5 2011, 20:22:23 UTC
i couldn't leave her all alone, awesome girl that she is! ^^
thanks a lot for commenting!

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jea_chan April 5 2011, 21:30:41 UTC
One of the best fics I ever read, really.
Good writing, good style, the sort of reading when you just NEED to read the next paragraph cause you so much want to know what's next.
You wrote all the details, and that's what makes a writing good. Mix it with the original plot and it comes out a pretty perfect fic.
Hope you won't stop right here and write something else, I'll love it!

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apple_of_my April 5 2011, 21:33:23 UTC
thanks a lot! a lot people say they like the details in that fic, so it makes me really happy because it was my intention from the start! i'll probably try to write more cl in the future, yes, though i'm considering this piece here is finished...

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jea_chan April 6 2011, 14:39:40 UTC
details make the story much more realistic!
good to know you won't give up writing, I'll wait for the next story then XD

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marked_for_life April 6 2011, 04:02:17 UTC
this was really good. i love the way it flows, especially the movement of jiyong and cl's relationship from awkward teenagers with raging hormones to a sort of friendship to something that is almost like siblings. all of the yg family cameos were great and yay for seungri-cl, who should be written far more than they are. (do i spy gtop?)

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apple_of_my April 6 2011, 13:19:33 UTC
You do spy GTop! I can't resist writing them, it seems...
Thanks for commenting!

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blackjack21x April 6 2011, 21:43:31 UTC
This is wonderful. I like the RiRin part...This is a great story. Will you do a Skydragon fan fic,perhaps? Or at least Teddy and CL. Keke~

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apple_of_my April 7 2011, 05:47:54 UTC
i already did post a gdcl and clteddy fic, recently, so now i'm gonna focus on my gri fic for a while...
anyway, thanks for commenting!

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