I feel like everything went downhill after i rhymed. It came out of my head and my fingers and I groaned. but i won't change or edit it, i feel like doing so reduces the soul of a poem.
and i stole a line from a Nelly Furtado song toward the end. It was playing, and it fit
I hate when that happens. Either way I still like the poem. Next time listen to something without lyrics. Then it's just your soul making up the words. Maybe I like the poem because of something i do that people find insane. I keep empty picture frames. When I look at them I can visualize who I want to see in it, and I see them for who they are not frozen when the picture was taken. You should try it. It works.
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and i stole a line from a Nelly Furtado song toward the end. It was playing, and it fit
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