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Fic: Digital Devil Saga [Eng]
Jun 21, 2008 23:39
Title: Semantics
Rating: R
Warnings: NSFW
Word count: 177
Prompt: Shin Megami Tensei: Digital Devil Saga, Lupa/Gale, paint, tracing the mark of the Wolves
A/N: Done for
Porn Battle at IJ
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fandom: digital devil saga
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Comments 11
nyxmidnight
June 22 2008, 03:52:33 UTC
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Gale/Lupa.
Just a tiny thing: to keep with Gale's idiom, I think He did not comprehend, but he wanted to. would be better. IMHO.
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daniela_lynx
June 22 2008, 03:58:13 UTC
Do you like it? ;3
I thought about it, too, but in the end I decided against it. It has been kind of overused in fandom, and feels more like a pun now XD
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nyxmidnight
June 22 2008, 03:59:39 UTC
I love it! Rawr, markings!
Okie ^^
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qara_isuke
June 22 2008, 04:01:11 UTC
.........wow. *fans self*
That is....both very hot and intense in it's sensuality.
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daniela_lynx
June 22 2008, 04:09:36 UTC
*Smiles widely!* Hot and intense? Woah, I'm flattered! Thank you! ^___^
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5cmprince
June 22 2008, 04:18:05 UTC
omg i loved thisss sob gale lupa sob TAT
i don't know if im wrong but i think the last sentence, shouldn't the tense be he "didn't understand" or he "hadn't understood" ? /english failure
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daniela_lynx
June 22 2008, 04:35:40 UTC
You did? 8DDD Awesome! (Those two, they broke me so good <33)
Nah, that was my English being fail again. Sorry! *h-headdesks* Fixed it!
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emerald_embers
June 22 2008, 22:45:15 UTC
BRAIN FALLS OUT OF EARS, DEAD WITH THE HOT
askdfkjasdhfjashkdf GOD YES
*totally came*
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daniela_lynx
June 27 2008, 21:41:43 UTC
Eeeeee! :DDDD *h-hands you back your brain, though, because those leakages may be dangerous.*
I'M GLAD IT HAS YOUR APPROVAL! <3333 You're totally my favourite writer for those two, so it means a lot! ^________^
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shiva_chan
June 24 2008, 07:51:26 UTC
Lupa/Gale = best thing ever! This was so hot...
Mmmmmm~~~~
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daniela_lynx
June 27 2008, 21:42:58 UTC
The world needs moar of it, isn't it? ;w;b
Thank youuuu! ♥
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Comments 11
Just a tiny thing: to keep with Gale's idiom, I think He did not comprehend, but he wanted to. would be better. IMHO.
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I thought about it, too, but in the end I decided against it. It has been kind of overused in fandom, and feels more like a pun now XD
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Okie ^^
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That is....both very hot and intense in it's sensuality.
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i don't know if im wrong but i think the last sentence, shouldn't the tense be he "didn't understand" or he "hadn't understood" ? /english failure
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Nah, that was my English being fail again. Sorry! *h-headdesks* Fixed it!
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askdfkjasdhfjashkdf GOD YES
*totally came*
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I'M GLAD IT HAS YOUR APPROVAL! <3333 You're totally my favourite writer for those two, so it means a lot! ^________^
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Mmmmmm~~~~
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Thank youuuu! ♥
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