When the bunnies attack....

[hariboo]

they do it with a vengeance and will not be stopped, so I don't even try (we all remember Monty Python and the Holy Grail...right?) Posted chronologically in regards to the story.

Comments

[oltha_heri]

That was an amazing last line.

People need to stop making me love angst!

[hariboo]

Thanks, awww angst needs love too! Personally sometimes a good angsty fic is ten times better than fluffy (not that I don't love me some fluff) but good angst *clings*

[odakota_rose]

*grin*
Yay!

*sends cookies*

That was great! *squee*
And so them..
I've got warm fuzzies.

Seriously, it was gorgeous, and the style on the first one was nice. Totally different, but nice, and it gave a real sense of that broken feeling..

[hariboo]

*takes cookies* YUM!

Thanks, the first one was a bit nerve wrecking b/c it was so different but Vala was different too, b/c of what happend so it worked out. :)

[odakota_rose]

Lol =D

Different is good, it makes awesome stories better.
It felt like she was shattered inside, and I think a large part of why that emotion came through so well was because you wrote it that way.

[hariboo]

Thank you, it's always nice to know my forays in new styles work out. And I'm glad Vala brokenness showed through.

[opari_meq]

I loved the style you used for this, I could feel Vala's pain, and Daniel's uncertainty, then commitment to offering healing, for Vala as well as himself, really lovely.

[hariboo]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked.

[hariboo]

Thanks :D