Ficlet: "Mr. Sickington"

Oct 04, 2010 02:28

Set only a few days after the finale. Written for the schmoop_bingo fic prompt "Sick in Bed."

Mr. Sickington )

fan fiction (all authors), fan fiction: yahtzee63

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silver_p October 6 2010, 02:54:05 UTC
Daniel is so cute it's unreal. This? Made me laugh because it's so him: “Mission: Dazzle Betty Into Falling In Love”

Ha, the STD thing made me laugh. And so did the fact that Daniel trips on Nyquil (so do I, to be honest!). I also really loved his thoughts about how caring for Molly during her cancer made him feel like he was being self-indulgent with the Mr. Sickington thing. Molly did face her cancer really bravely, and it makes sense that he grew from that experience.

Chocolate pudding! LOLed so much over that. My sick food is Nutella. I will eat it with a spoon when I'm under the weather.

And of course Betty will still care for him when he's sick. :) How sweet is she for coming over?

The words slipped out: “I adore you.”

<3

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yahtzee63 October 6 2010, 03:22:06 UTC
MORE feedback! My cup runneth over.

Daniel really could be a bit of a baby when he got sick -- but then, most of us get a little babyish when we feel bad. And as much as Molly's example would have encouraged him to man up, that doesn't mean he wouldn't need (and appreciate) a little of Betty's TLC from time to time.

I have pudding. Just wanted to share.

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silver_p October 6 2010, 03:34:23 UTC
Hee, I love reviewing your stuff. You always give the reviewer so much to pick out and squee over. :)

I agree, and I think Betty's always going to be the type to want to take care of the people around her. It's just part of her loving personality. Honestly, no wonder Daniel is crazy about her--she's a total gem.

I can haz some e-pudding?

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yahtzee63 October 6 2010, 04:12:40 UTC
I will now fax you chocolate pudding with the amazing FOOD FAX (patent pending, as in, pending its invention).

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yahtzee63 October 13 2010, 05:15:52 UTC
Thanks muchly! Poor Daniel impresses best when he tries least.

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