Secret. ttm # 54 - Cry havoc. PG-13. Silent wish.

[dangerous_story]

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Summary: This is like a year after my last story, Australia. Renée finds something out that shocks her and people do stupid things while angry, upset, etc. But she doesn't actually take it out on the right person.

(Sorry if the the all caps thing bugs anyone.)

Comments

[thismaz]

Oh dear. I kind of feel sorry for all of them in this one. Renee because secrets like that always do harm when the come out. And they always do come out. Jay because she used him and he obviously does like her, even if he's not sure he likes her that way, and Aiden, well, for the obvious reasons. The fact that he walked away suggests he was really hurt.
Nicely done.

And this - She just needed a pat on the head and a there, there really made me smile. *g*

[dangerous_story]

Yeah, totally. It hurt them all.

There are going to be totally some consequences from that whole thing.

Probably will write something with Jay and Aidan, or Jay and Renée. Something to resolve what happened there. It's gonna hurt but it'll be okay in the end. lol. :)

Jay's got this kinda crush thing on Renée but it's not you know full blown infatuation. and off course she is Aidan's half-sister, so that makes it double weird. lol.

Poor Jay. Heh.

And yeah, lol. Sometimes you think a person is really goin to do that you and it's annoying as hell. lol.

[spuffy_seeker]

tee hee! it turned out so great girl i love it. it's just like i thought it would be when we talked about it

really great chapter.

my poor boy aidan never even saw it coming

[dangerous_story]

Yeah. The poor thing. But he'll get his revenge sooner than he thinks!!

Well, in written but maybe in the fic it'll be a few days later or something. Heh.

Thanks. :D