If you leave it there, I will find I way to kill you through the computer.
No, really, it sucked me in. I want to know what happens next :)
Con-crit-wise, I found the very beginning a little hard to get into, which was probably because it's light on character interaction. It was working for me by the end of the chapter, though, so I wouldn't worry about that much.
Oh wow. I had no idea anyone was reading what I post here.
You know, I keep trying to get Oliver to talk to other people, but he goes off and angsts instead.
Btw, ANY ideas for a title? Trust me, my ideas are... ugh. They range the gamut from "muppet segments" to "dramatic-chipmunk level melodramatic" to "bad porno titles" without a single decent one in there.
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No, really, it sucked me in. I want to know what happens next :)
Con-crit-wise, I found the very beginning a little hard to get into, which was probably because it's light on character interaction. It was working for me by the end of the chapter, though, so I wouldn't worry about that much.
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You know, I keep trying to get Oliver to talk to other people, but he goes off and angsts instead.
Btw, ANY ideas for a title? Trust me, my ideas are... ugh. They range the gamut from "muppet segments" to "dramatic-chipmunk level melodramatic" to "bad porno titles" without a single decent one in there.
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