Pleas&Whimpers

[dandanfung]

Title: Pleas & Whimpers
Pairing: HaeMin, implied Kangmin, implied KyuHae
Genre: Romance, slight angst, slight college!AU
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It was their routine every Thursday morning, the bus ride they occasionally shared home together. Maybe it was time to break out of their routine.
A/N: It's been so long since I wrote, and it's been hard. I

Comments

[babycloud_ai]

I like the conversation in the bus, even though it seems casual, it felt melancholic? I was like 'what is wrong with this two?' and as I read more I began to understand, just that I wondered why they are in a relationship with someone else when they have lingering feelings for each other, I really don't get why ppl do that sometimes, it seems foolish. But anyhow, I'm glad they made up even though some other party are bound to get hurt, I mean, hey, you can't be noble all the time right?

[dandanfung]

I'm glad I got the melochlic undertone of their awkward conversation across.

What you wonder and what you feel is all in my head, I just didn't get it down into the fic because the ideas were still floating around.

Thanks for reading this~

Is that Key in your icon? Or did I just make a total fail.

[babycloud_ai]

That's definitely Key bb ♥

[eiarim]

The first time I read haemin and I caught up with a very beautiful fic♥
(well there's a first for everything, and this piece will sure be on my mind:D)
P/S:On the other note, I think hae is so sweet towards min.

[dandanfung]

Aww thanks~ Haemin is very underrated and rare, it's hard for me to find haemin fics.

Glad I started you off with a good haemin? <3

[kangaroobb]

awww..
this is beautiful...
**dies**
especially the scene where sungmin drop his umbrella and kiss donghae XD
**squeal**

[dandanfung]

Thanks~

I developped a new liking towards kissing scenes, like, a huge liking. <3

[pinksharpii]

Aww. This is so cute.
Donghae came back :D

[dandanfung]

Donghae never left. They weren't together, but that doesn't mean they left each other.

Thanks for reading.

^^

[efeje]

"A boy on the bus suddenly felt his heart drop at the sight. His grip on the two textbooks tightened as a tear slinked down his cheek." - poor boy ... it was Kangin or Kyu ? more to Kyu i think ....

but i didn't care much about that boy's feeling right now as long as i had Happy Haemin hahaha *evil grin*

P.S : i wonder what is your major in college ... your writing skill is awesome , you used a lot of hard words .... very professional , just like reading a novel ~