Comments | dancing_mercury: Nothing Lay Between (4B/?), Kirk/Spock, Pike/Spock, NC-17

dancing_mercury

Nothing Lay Between (4B/?), Kirk/Spock, Pike/Spock, NC-17

Jul 27, 2009 22:17

Title: Nothing Lay Between (4B/?)
Authors: salvaged_pride and dancing_mercury
Fandom: Star Trek (XI)
Characters/Pairings: Pike/Spock (Ch4), implied George Kirk/Pike (Ch4), Kirk/Spock (rest of it)
POV: Chris (Pike's)
Rating: NC-17 - No joke!
Words: 8.492
Inspired by: This prompt on st_xi_kink: Spock is a Vulcan concubine/courtesan.
Chapter summary: Flashback - Christopher's first ( Read more... )

unfinished, fandom: star trek, rating: nc-17, nothing lay between, author: salvaged_pride, st kink meme, char: pike, char: spock

Comments 7

illariy July 28 2009, 16:00:24 UTC

Oh, I am enjoying this so much. I like how you evoke such a formal, refined atmosphere with all the details on Vulcan culture and it's funny to see all the ways Spock has been educated to please his company while Pike stays ignorant for so long. *g*

The massage scene and the sex were both incredibly hot and sensual. *fans self* :D :D :D

Pssst: It should be "Perhaps more slowly than he would have liked" and likewise "larger than a fourth of a shot", "less intense feeling than the previous sip", "less than appropriate", "More than", "younger than his years". Basically, than if it's a comparison and then if it's a sequence or a conclusion. Off to the next part now. :D

dancing_mercury July 28 2009, 16:03:03 UTC

Haha, yes! I was such in a rush to get this out the door because we hadn't posted a chapter in so long, I didn't nitpick the finer points of grammar. :] But thanks for pointing them out for me! ♥ I'll fix them now.

smutjunkie July 28 2009, 18:14:18 UTC

I am breathless.

anonymous August 7 2009, 04:55:14 UTC

Hi. So, the piercing. At first I thought it was a cock ring. And then I realized what it was. And, I, uh, that's... yes.

This story = I can't even tell you how awesome it is, I'm just reading it right now and trying not to spontaneously orgasm with the power of your description. Very, very nicely done.

pslasher August 10 2009, 23:51:27 UTC

Oh wow, I love the Spock you have created here. So sensual, elegant, restrained in the beginning, and then unleashed so powerfully with the touch telepathy. Mind melds are a huge kink for me with Spock, and you created such a beautiful experience with he and Pike. I'm so looking forward to seeing how this plays out with Kirk, I hope it's powerful and all-consuming when it happenes.

Also, I loved the Vulcan Port. Where can I get my hands a bottle, right?

angels3 September 12 2009, 04:50:19 UTC

Wow that was totally unexpected.

I'm assuming Kirk has no idea.

Good lord that one got me.