[FIC]: Openly Hiding

May 27, 2009 02:31

Title: Openly Hiding
Fandom: Star Trek (XI)
Characters/Pairings: Christopher Pike, Mrs. Pike, Kirk/Spock
POV: Christopher's
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2.840
Warning: This is the tamest voyeurism fic ever written. It might not even qualify as one.

Inspired By: st_xi_kink Part 2 prompt:

Christopher Pike finds out about the relationship between Kirk and Spock.A/N ( Read more... )

char: kirk, fandom: star trek, fic, char: pike, st kink meme, char: spock

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jade_dragoness May 27 2009, 11:21:55 UTC
*grinning* Well, I guess it all depends on what your definition of trouble is.

Awesome Pike POV! Thank you for writing it.

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dancing_mercury May 27 2009, 20:54:29 UTC
It's up for interpretation. ;)

Thank you for reading! I chose the prompt because it had to be Pike's POV--someone outside the Enterprise watching them (K&S).

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blackmystique May 27 2009, 11:39:56 UTC
OP here. Didn't really know where I should reply, but I decided here would be okay.

My favorite part about this fic has to be Pike's wife. She's awesome. You wrote this beautifully, thank you very much for responding :D

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dancing_mercury May 27 2009, 20:51:16 UTC
Thanks for reading!

Pike's wife in this fic was very fun to write, even if she is totally original (as far as I know). I figure he has to have someone to talk to about all the Starfleet nonsense he has to go through.

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delamna September 24 2009, 09:03:32 UTC
I've pretended to myself she's Number One from the TOS unaired pilot. She didn't have a name we knew, either, and she was very calm and intelligent and very discreetly into Pike. :)

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_profiterole_ May 27 2009, 19:37:53 UTC
That was great! ^__^

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dancing_mercury May 27 2009, 20:54:47 UTC
Thank you! :)

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futago_02 May 28 2009, 09:14:38 UTC
:D love this! the outside look, and the glances of passion... flirting with danger, yep.

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dancing_mercury May 29 2009, 21:14:32 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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liesofdesire May 29 2009, 01:54:37 UTC
This is really good. It kept me interested, which can be difficult with outside-POV stories. I liked Pike's wife, too.

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dancing_mercury May 29 2009, 21:15:02 UTC
Thank you! Pike's wife does seem to be a bit popular. :)

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