Fic - Those You've Known (1/5?)

[dancing_in_time]

Title: Those You’ve Known
Rating: T (For implied adult themes and mild language)
Pairing: Implied Susan/Caspian
Summary: Susan continues living life after the tragic events of The Last Battle, but begins seeing ghosts and memories of a former life. Spoilers for the movies and books.
Disclaimer: I am not the Mouse, whether you interpret that as

Comments

[monicaop]

Wow, so she's late, she lost her job and she's living with an artist?? Poor Susan, great story, I liked Lydia :D hugs, Monica

[dancing_in_time]

Thanks! Yeah, Susan's having a rough time. And I can't promise that it will get much better for the dear girl.

And I'm glad you like Lydia, she just appeared to me out of nowhere and I knew I had to include her. She's a sweetheart.

*Hugsback* Thanks again!

[yourstar202]

(O_O) (>_<) (^_^)

You. Are. Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this chapter! Absolutely wonderful! It's perfect! And I love the fact that you said you "loving borrowed" my Ryland. I lent him out to another friend last year or so and she called it pimping! LMAO! I'm glad to see him cross genres/countries! LOL!

Can't wait for more!

[dancing_in_time]

LOLz, love the faces! They pretty much sum up the chapter.

Thanks, dear. Yes, I did lovingly borrow your Ry-Ry, lol, hopefully I won't maul him to death or anything. My mind can get pretty scary, but that's awesome that he's crossing fandoms and countries...I wish I could!

More will come! At some point...

XD

[yourstar202]

LoLz to the mauling Ry to death! I swear his character is immortal and holds up shop in the back of my head! I pull him out when I need a random character! LOL!

*HUGS*

YAY! I can't wait to read more!

[defying_reason]

Oh my, this is going to be really interesting.

Poor Susan... and though I am teh Casue supporter, I find Ryland/Susan cute... it's good to know someone did love her and looked after her WHEN EVERYONE ELSE DIDN'T *glares at Peter, Edmund, Lucy and Aslan in particular*

I will keep on reading.

PS: When's Caspian showing up?

[dancing_in_time]

Well, if I gave away that information, where would all the tension go? Haha, you'll find Caspian at some point, I promise. Maybe sooner than later, but we'll have to see. ;)

Yeah, I'm growing attached to Ry/Su as well. I blame yourstar for introducing me to the bloke. And I feel that even though Susan could look after herself, she still needs that support base.

Yay, I have a reader! Well, more than one, but yay!

And, in case you were wondering, this is the epic fic of angstness.

[girls_are_weird]

i swear i'm not ignoring the actual chapter on purpose but... eeeeeee! your new layout is soooo pretty! o.o i can't stop staring at it.

as for the chapter, i'm definitely liking it. i kinda like ryland; from all of his three lines i'm figuring him to be a sort of cross between peter and edmund... hopefully he'll be around more in the future so i'll be able to expand my mental image of him xD but so far, so good. poor susan, her life really must've sucked after that train wreck =( i'm glad she's not alone, at least.

i'm very interested in knowing where you're going with this! ^^ so i'll be waiting eagerly for the next installment.

[dancing_in_time]

Oh, believe me, I'm distracted by the layout!

I'm glad you're liking this. It was a hard/weird chapter to write, mostly because I wasn't exactly sure where it was going to end, but I think the going will be easier from this point on.

At least for me, Susan is a different story.

Yeah, Ry is very interesting. I never saw him as a cross between the brothers, but I can kind of see it. I just see him more as a nice guy *although, according to yourstar he's a rebellious rockstar guy who doesn't really care what everyone else thinks, but a softy at heart* who gives Susan her space, but also is there for her to fall back on.

I can't wait to write the next chapter! I'm so excited that my baby is out in the world now, so I can't wait to figure out what it's going to do!

[smartyshortie]

This was beautiful! I loved it! I always hated that no one cared what happened to Susan when her family died...made me so mad...but I'm glad you are giving us some insight. I could totally see this happening...and I loved Lydia...is she gonna be more important in the story? kinda seems that way...XD idk...just speculations! XD

anyways, great work and I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

[dancing_in_time]

Thank you! Yeah, Susan really got the metaphorical shaft after the train wreck and it never settled well with me, so this is my way to make amends...with myself...and I hope Jack isn't too angry with me, lol.

As for Lydia, I honestly can say that I have no clue how more prominent she'll become, but since the fan reaction is pretty strongly in favor of her, I think I'm going to try to fit her in more. She's a dear, really.

I can't wait to write the next chapter, so I'm glad you're looking forward to it!

[smartyshortie]

Haha Well I'm glad you're making amends...I always liked Susan XD

well no worries about Lydia...I just thought she was adorable XD

Have fun writing!!!!!